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Hmm i got the "lie to yukine" devotion point and then when i go through the next one i get is the "defend my ideals". Im missing "complete the trace in order" can someone tell me how to get this one? There dont seem to be any choices in between there and i couldnt find any traces anymore there....

This would be the trace in the basement just before you enter the room with all the debris. During this trace there’s choices to continue on or to hold back. You need to hold back once you reach the door. This trace only can be activated when the corruption says to trace. Very small window to do it.

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Oh okay! I remember that when the corruption was talking about tracing but i must have missed the window then, thanks alot!

No problem!

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After some more searching i found it! Also found the one at kurbelthors hideout which yukine created to trach mel a lesson while looking for the missing trace haha

That one though doesnt seem to have any major impact on anything am i right? Im no asking for exact locations but are there any more traces at random places that dont really matter in terms of devotion points or plot and are just there for lore or background info like the one at the hideout? I mean you could totally miss that one and i dont see any downside to it...

Yeah there's a few traces spread out through Chapter 3. They are mostly for lore dumps but a few can have accompanying devotion points. Later on, I plan to make another page in the Star-Chart to track the traces, just have not gotten to it yet. There are no traces in the new update since you can't have a trace in a world created by magic.

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How do you talk about fate with Yukine.

Also idk if this is a bug or not but when i spoke with Yukine in the dormitory it didn't give his face with a heart next to it. 

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Intertwined has a bunch of hidden paths that don't trigger unless certain events are completed. You may have spoken to him in the dorm, but if the triggers were not met it would not trigger the specific branch to get his devotion point. 

For the fate devotion point you need to already have obtained the point prior in the prologue which will trigger the scene. Afterwards you have to confront him and then ask about the future.

Could i have a hint on the prologue like what the first decision I should make cause i have been at it for about 30 mins and that hint would help me enough for me to figure it out by myself.

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Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck why do there have to be so many combinations I just want to 100% Yukines path

Well first and foremost you need to make sure that you have NSFW turned on. Make sure the text in the options is lit up. If it is not, the devotion system does not work properly. 
2nd. The hint is you think Yukine looks fine as he is. You will understand what that means if you decide to talk with Yukine.

Thx

hello! absolutely LOVE your game and how great the story is! (I'm pretty emotional so it kinda got me lol,) also, I know that this is a philosophical game but is there going to be any "intimate" or nudity scenes within the game? Other than that, I think this game is GREAT! 

Im glad your enjoying the game! Yes, there actually is some already. One notable scene is within Yukine's side story. The game is a slow burn due to the nature of the story but there will be nsfw.

Alright. This is deep, philosophical, creepy, and TOTALLY up my alley. Loving this already.

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I’m very glad you’re enjoying it so far! Even more crazy shenanigans to come.

Why do xou have a grudge against ostriches?? 🤣

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haha it’s a running joke between myself and my proofreader so we just rolled with it.

Heh, well they are devilish birds 😉 in a single day, I watched 1ne steal my chips and throw my friend from her back 😅

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That is very true haha! If you aren't careful they will peck you!

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In Yukine's side story, for the last question of speaking the words the saved you. Which time exactly is it talking about? There are multiple times where Melmond gets saved and I can't seem to find the correct words for it.

So this refers to his past. The scene that showed him as a kid. There should be three words that are mentioned a couple times in the VN.

Thanks.

Ok. So, same subject. (Sorry for bothering you again with this.) But I've tried going though the story again and I can't find the words for it. Is it possible for you to give me a list of moments where the words are said, or (If its too much hassle to go make said list) for you to give me the words. Sorry again for bothering you with this.

Keep marching on are the words in question. That question was designed to actually be really hard so thats why its a tricky one to get right.

Thank you. And sorry again for bothering you with this.

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The story and the characters are so good 😊 I literally cry because it can also be applied to real life events and experience.

That was the goal of this story to reflect real life closely minus the magic of course haha. Glad your enjoying it!

I've enjoyed what you've made so far, though this anticipation has me in mess because I wanna know what sort of crazy shenanigans we're instore for. I can wait though since I stumbled upon this

Haha I am glad that your enjoying it and don't worry a new update is coming soon!

As long as you keep us updated on your work, i dont mind the wait. If i had the money i would support you on patrion

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I definitely will try to. I know I have been pretty bad about updating the progress which I will try very hard to keep everyone in the loop going forward.

I know keeping everyone posted can be hard. I also know that working with renply takes a lot of patience as well. Trust I want to make my own vn but I am not a good artist and I don't have the money to pay anyone to do the art work for me. Not to mention I have a 15 year old laptop that I write a book on, play multiple visual novels, and try making 3d models so I can make animated videos using while have a job from 8am - 2 pm 5 days a week and practicing the piano and trying to stream. I try to do a lot at once. Luckily I can with my adhd.

Oh man. That is a lot of stuff to do all at once. I have a normal job on top of the VN and several other stuff. My ADHD works against me sadly and makes me forget to do a lot of things like keep people up to date so it is a constant battle to keep myself in line with everything going on. 

Im always hyper because of my adhd but i learned to control it for the most part but my adhd also effects my attention to stuff. If i start focusing on anything then i wont notice anything else. If i dont focus on anything then i space out

Same here. I do need to keep focus pretty consistently or before I know it several hours have passed by and I have done 0 work. 

It's quite surprising to find a visual novel game this good, i've never expected a visual novel be so down deep yet so touched when the good sentences pops up (bare with me bc i've never played a vn game like this before). The amount of effort put into this i could guess a lot or even more.


But anyway, all i wanted to say is that this game is amazing and quite interesting and touching when i kept on facing irl problems, most of the sentences just hit me right to the heart like nothing everytime i feel lost, i'm impressed on this vn for sure and i'm looking forward for more, but if that's all, it's fine, i can just restart from scratch and try every choices i did not choose.


That's all i can say, sincerely, thank you.

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sorry if my words and sentences are not clear xd

(i'm also suffering trying to get the second devotion point on Yukine bc i'm stupid lol)

I am so glad you’re enjoying the game and I will keep doing my best to bring more quality updates to the table. Yukine’s second devotion point is a troublesome one to get due to requiring a string of correct choices to trigger it.

You're always welcome, and for the devotion points, i guess all i have to do is try to backtrack which choices i might've missed or didn't get chosen and hope luck is on my side.


Again, thank you.

For now, yes. I am working on some new QoL changes that will help with hints and trackers for the devotion points. I just have been trying to sort out the code for the star-chart since when I made it, it was hastily coded and kind of a mess.

i see, well i don't want to interrupt you further so i just want to say thank you for responding to my and other people's comments despite focusing on developing the game further and facing our greatest enemy which is life itself with difficult obstacles to pass through, but i have hope on you that you can make it through, that's all from me, again, thank you from my heart.

hello can someone help me i will quickly explain i am in chapter 2 where the main character Melmond and his friends find a portal the thing is there is a riddle here is the riddle question

A.R.M.A.:I can fill a space or a single mortal heart. If you try to distribute me, I will always leave. There are those who have me, but I cannot be shared For I only exist as one, I can never be matched

so I already tried to think of the answer but of course it was a failure so is it possible to give me either the answer or some hints :(

For ease, I will give you a pretty easy hint. The answer to this specific riddle is the title of the chapter. 

  1. so already thank you very much and in addition I am a little disgusted because the answer was in front of my eyes XD

Haha no problem. It’s the riddles that are super obvious that are the hardest ones to solve.

Is the answer not time??? Im stuck on this as well

If its the riddle for the gateway than no. That riddle answer isn't time it is loneliness.

can someone help me with all Iliff's devotion points? 2 devotion points left and I'm already racking my brains xd

Sorry I did not see this. I am planning to make a way to track which devotion points you missed as it is tricky to find them all with how many hidden paths exist in the game already. Bare with me and I will try to get this particular update out quickly.

How can i get all of yukine's devotion points? I only get 6/8

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Well, it looks like there may be a bug here. There is only 7 released devotion points after checking the files. The last one is in the side story that I did not finish yet. Here is a small guide though to help.

Yukine Devotion Point Locations

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1 - Coin Toss Game
2 - Converse with Yukine after having selected very specific choices after meeting back up with everyone from exploring Angel Heights with Iliff.
3 - Select a specific set of responses while speaking to Yukine in Angel Heights after everyone else has disappeared.
4 - "A little help never hurt" - Choose this at the end of Chapter 1.
5 - Talk about those 'parts' in the beginning of Chapter 2
6 - Answer correctly to Yukine's question about time.
7 - Correctly answer all the trial questions with Yukine when he's talking through the orb.
8 - [Not released] Complete the questions all correctly

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Thank you for the guide and keep up the good work.

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Help i'm stuck on Iliff side story (T^T)

Stuck how?

on the administrator password:)

Ah, you need to answer the questions all correctly based on the events that happened. It will eventually mention the doodles on the letter that you received from your mother and that will spell out the password.


For ease of the situation since you were stuck on it, I will write the password here if you do not want to go through the hassle of trying to poke through the parts of the side story again.

Password: Stars or stars
Either or is acceptable for the scene to progress.

I just wanted to know, how many chapters will be in this game? It's fine if you don't know yet.

My goal was 24. This only applies to the main story. The side-stories are separate. This number can change depending on how the story branches out and how the writing goes.

Ok, thanks for clarifying, I can't wait to see where this vn goes!

No problem!

Is there any way to change the color of the text or the text box? It's quite hard to read the white text over blue.

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There is not at the moment, but I can look into possibly adding something like that in the future.

I'm really enjoying it so far, I love your writing!!! but I feel stupid for not getting Iliff's 11 points

Haha thank you! It's tricky to get all the devotion points since some of them are in very obscure places and there's several branching paths that exist which some won't even show up if you don't have prior points so it's actually a pretty complex system.  I was thinking of making a guide for it in the future to be honest. So, don't beat yourself up for missing some!

Has anyone got the answer to the rittle in the new build 

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Hint:


















What is the theme of the chapter

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