Loving the story, it's a little different from the old one, but it's still good, but a question how tall are the four main characters?
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INTERTWINED HAS RETURNED!
I want to publicly apologize that it took this long to finalize the new re-writes and additions to Intertwined. As mentioned, we wanted to re-do the entire series to make sure that it flows better and was easier on us to make better quality updates. The story is a bit different than before, but only to fit in key parts that we missed. I hope you all enjoy what we have to offer in Intertwined 1.0.
Due to the re-writes. We will be releasing this update for patreon and public at the same time. All subsequent updates, Patreon will receive it earlier.
Next Update (Intertwined 1.01): 6/10/2022
Next Patreon Update (Intertwined 1.0): 6/6/2022
Intertwined is an episodic Visual Novel which will be released monthly. We will do our best to make sure that we release on time each month, but we developers wish to focus more on quality than anything. If an update is delayed, please see to our devlogs as we will do our best to keep our viewers informed of any release changes.
Intertwined is a Homoerotic Furry-based Visual Novel that revolves around Melmond, a new student who is attending Thornewood University. Thornewood University is the first school in the country to become an all-canine school and is one of the highest revered due to their special major programs. Melmond is a first-year student who will dive into the world of uncertainty with his own love life, stress of being a student, and the power of an ancient magic that has only been mildly spoken about. You will face the ghosts of your past, the uncertainty of your future, and events that will shake you to the very core.
Melmond Reino Grant, a nineteen-year-old freshman is about to embark on a new journey in his life. Anxious and skittish of this new chapter, Melmond finds himself very distraught by the notion of going to a new place in which he does not even feel like he belongs. Little does he know that the time for worrying about trivial events such as cliques and schoolwork will be thrown out the window as he and his newly found friends begin a journey that will transcend their old lives and spin a new chapter that will pave a new path for all to follow.
Only time will tell.
Only fate can answer.
as our lives become intertwined.
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- [Poll]Sprite Changes14 days ago
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- [DevLog]Intertwined Inquiry 1.02Jul 07, 2022
- [Update]Intertwined 1.01 ALPHAJun 10, 2022
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The characters are all roughly around 6ft tall. Iliff is slightly shorter than the others. I may have to adjust some sprites to reflect this.
I kind of like the original better near the beginning but the re-write is better later on, I felt more continuity with the main character pre-rewrite at least the chunk near the start.
the plot so far, a lot of it can be understood very basically if you apply the lens of chaos theory (works for pre-rewrite and post-rewrite)
it would be simple to assume reality is a complex system and the corruption is some outside variable that was somehow introduced, which would lead to rippling effects through out the entire complex system.
and considering the outside variables are completely unknown this brings to light the quantum uncertainty principle which is probably where any kind of powers would arise from, a simple shift in prospective here + there and congrats you're a dog dang hairy wizard.
(damn that's like a pun inside a pun XD)
haha I had to double take and read this over again to grasp a few parts but yeah the re-write is to allow more story to fit without falling off in some places. The beginning of the old one was pretty good but I feel all will come to a good point once the next update is out.
yes a new update woo I love intertwined
Just played both the 0.09 alpha build and the current 1.02 build and damn it's like a totally different game!
yeah the 1.0 and beyond builds I rebuilt the game from the ground up cause I didn’t like how I rushed certain parts lol.
In my eyes there are some changes from the "original" I miss / feel awkward currently. In any case, I can't wait to see how this turns out, keep up the good work! (edited for poor grammar)
I'm back to see what i've been missing since the first chapter.
Pretty interesting story so far, I like the concept a lot and I'm curious to see where you take it.
I do have to ask though - The hyper genitals on the characters, is that just a standard stylistic choice for you or is there some story related reason for it?
it originally was a style choice but I have been thinking about making it a story item that could be pretty interesting. Not quite sure yet.
Talk about mega co... Err, mega sheath ^///^"
please help me the riddle i try everything but can not find the answer
The riddle answer is time. I will make sure to make that more apparent in the future if I do that type of thing again.
when it asked for the riddle my mind went blank haha.
just finished the game and its absolutely great,
will there be an update that continues to their training session??, i just played this yesterday and finished today,it would be great if it has a context that shows how the MC will get the other cards...
The game is actually going through some major re-writes. The 1.0 update that exists is the rewrite to Day 1. These re-writes are to pull all the characters more in line and actually get some missed plot-points into the game.
the rewrite is great. its plot makes a lot more sense than before but is also more immersive. I can't wait for more
Xou guys did a good job of rewriting UwU while it was fine before, it's definitely better now, more immursive, and is able to pervey the feelings xou want to get across~ ^^_ I had generally good vibes as I read~ And while the implications of what's to come are daunting, I'm excited to see how xa'll will change the way this plays out :p
I have a few concerns "^^, not meaning to critique to harshly, but what happened to my Ongaku!? OwO Looks like my handsome boy ate 1ne too many chicken nuggers and gained a pair of thunder thighs! xD but... It haaas made way for something else between them thighs to grow O///O
Generally, I like the new art :) the lack of shading somehow looks better, when logically, the lack of shadows should have it lose depth, but it doesn't! n_n
My 2econd concern is the inability to change MC's name, any reason for that? :/ Not that I hate playing out as someone else, but for me, being able to use my fursona helps me immurse myself as the protagonist.
But overall, good job! :D I can tell xa'll had fun planning out how to rewrite this, and when xou're enjoying xourself, it really does translates into xour work UwU keep it up >.</
Originally the Ongaku sprite had an error with the large thighs, but everyone thought it was kinda funny and also thought that it would add diversity to the characters since they are all canines. As for the MCs name, in the story that is the name of the character and we felt that providing the actual character name would help hook readers to understand his character as who he is rather than if a name was given by the reader. Hope that all makes sense lol.
Honestly created an account just to tell you how much I love this game.
I came into this not having high hopes, as someone who has played many VNs, I have seen the good, bad and the worse.
This blew me away, many VNs ive played tend to focus too much on visuals or choices rather than story and you, you absolute beautiful person created exactly what i have wanted to see in a VN.
Not once have I ever been so enthralled by a game like this, the writing is superb. While there may be some parts where I was confused, it was rather easy to follow along.
Thank you for making a wonderful game, and I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Thank you. This means a lot. I have wanted nothing more than to focus on the story and that is why my team and I are going back to do a full re-write of the two chapters. The over-all story will remain the same, but we are cleaning up some parts that were confusing and filling in some plot holes that happened. I hope the re-writes will be just as good, if not better than the original!
ummm... just after class if you show the book the game shows that the main character asks to see the book that they showed . should this not be the professor soren asking?
Oh whoops. This was an error. Intertwined is being re-created from the ground up so this will be fixed during that. It is mostly to fix the writing, but I hope the new re-writes will appeal to people haha!
it's fine XD it's more amusing then anything i suppose.
i actually didn't even notice for a few seconds and the was like "wait, what?!" and scrolled back through dialog.
i also stand at the precipice arcanus and am excited to see what happens next but my patience is vast and distractions are plenty.
i'm sure your re-writes will do fine :)
oh :) i see the main menu has changed since i last played.
and the mouse is custom , very nice indeed.
i guess this means i have a lot to look forward to and im very excited.
great game also Lliff is the best boi
i cant solve the riddle in sunday sep 16 pls i need help
love this update hope for more nsfw
My Congratulations!!!An amazing VN i was searching one like this since long time, and this is really, realy good!! From Italy.
Great update :O
Thank you for your amazing work! There are 3 best mystic VN's i seen ever - Intertwined, Repeat and Echo.I do not undertake to judge which is better, all are good in their own way. Look forward to the next update!
Greetings from Russia!
yesss love the new updat
Just gonna say, the MC is a great example role model of a motivational speaker. haha
This made me laugh so hard considering the MC literally wings everything he does haha.
This look good, I would play it if it comes to android
We are looking into getting an android build made. Hopefully soonish.
Only first chapter finished?
How much will be of them?
after doing this crazy adventure I STILL CANNOT PRONOUNCE ILIFF CORRECTLY
Eye-liff is how you pronounce it.
I have not made a port for android yet. I will have to look into it.
I'm speechless. I can't describe how amazing this Vn is, I was putting off playing it for months and I regret not doing it before, the story left me hooked and I couldn't stop playing until the update was finished. And woow the art style is fascinating, and the music chosen is without a doubt the best, I just love this Vn. Hope to help you on Patreon soon, you really deserve it, can't wait for the next update.
(By the way, an apology if my English is not good, it is not my native language.)
Thank you so much for your comment. I am glad your enjoying the game! I hope the next Chapter will be just as good for you!
I just found another itch account posting this game. Do you know about that account?
Edit:Thanks. I reported it.
That account is now "404"
*NOT REALLY SPOILERS BUT STILL GOOD TO CONSIDER BEFORE READING!*
Really enjoyed the game so far! The Tarot cards were not expected, primarily because I am not a big fan of them but I felt a bit excited about it when going through the story. I guess that's good?
Though, I have a bit of a problem understanding the end of Day 4 (that blood scene), especially how it fits in the storyline. I called some of my friends over and see if they can find some logic in it. So far some good ideas have been spoken but nothing crucial. So may I ask, what is it with the snow (if it's possible to answer)? There wasn't any snowfall, so the whole scene seems impossible to ever occur...
I also wanted to get some explanation (if it's again possible) on Melmond's good and bad eye. In the story, it is said that he can't see on his RIGHT eye until later in the game and that's noticable by a scar on his eye. But sometimes, Melmond is shown with a scar on his LEFT eye (game UI with Melmond's head in a circle + on a card that Kurt is holding also features the same issue). Is there any reason for the scar to change places? My other guess is, if it was maybe changed during development? It's quite confusing to say the least! :-(
For the end, I want to wish every single one of you best luck to the future for anything you're currently working on! Keep up the good work!
Let me answer some of your questions. The snowfall is caused by magic. WInter's Fury is a character you encounter who does use ice magic. The snowfall was supposed to simulate that and it is explained much more in the next update that is coming. As for the blood scene itself, that was more of a dream not an actual event that happened. If that is not clear, we can make some edits.
For Melmond's scar, he actually has two scars. A scar across his eye on his right eye. and a lightning scar on his left eye. So that may be what you are confused about. The lightning scar does not show on his younger character because it happened after the fact.
Any other questions, I can try to answer to the best of my ability.
Downloaded this because it looked interesting and I have to say I'm glad I did. The story had me interested from the start, but once the tarot came up I was hooked. Can't wait for the next update! I'm excited to see where the story goes from here.
I'm glad your enjoying it! The Tarot are a main part of the game so you will be seeing them more and more.
I really like it! :D
Hmmmm it's good so far though I am playing this on my phone via joiplay so the mini game thing is a bit funky, as it is pretty much luck based(have to rapid tap and reload till you win took me about ten trys for the first round 3 or four for the second. But either way I'm enjoying it so far it's a pleasant change of pace from the style of visual novel I normally play.
Sorry if it’s a little clunky on phones. I tested the VN using a PC so I am not sure how it acts on a phone.
its fine I'm mostly putting this message up in case others on mobile want to play it genuinely the only issue is the mini game it might be better on tablet as the hitboxes would be bigger but if you save and hit as soon as they apear you can pass fairly easily
This update was awesome!! And new Yukine animations are looking good too, like for tail wagging. Will the other doggos receive it too? 😅
The plan is to animate them all at some point. I was testing the animations with this update to see if they will work well and it seems they have.
Thank you for an interesting update!
That reminds me a "Repeat" VN by Shirokoi:) Wishes, strange sounds...
Repeat was definitely an inspiration. I love the supernatural vibe so I do my best to incorporate it.
need help on rittle
The answer to the riddle is Time. I forgot to make that easier my bad lol.
Thanks to the power of Joiplay I can now play this promising gayme
Thank you for your great work!
Greetings from Russia.
Is there NSFW content in this game? I don't have a problem with that stuff U just want to know before I dive into it
As of the moment there is nothing explicit. There is one sprite that appears in a swimming speedo, but nothing revealing. Down the line there will be, but I will be adding a switch to change between sfw and nsfw in a future update.
Just played through the VN, I like it this far.
Ongaku's face looks a bit squished, like as if he spent his entire childhood getting mach 1 footballs in the face.