Intertwined

I have a question to Yukines Star chart... In chapter 1, how Do I Get the Star for the „Talk after choosing the right paths"

Thanks for the nice game^^

It blew my mind when I came across this in Chapter 1. I can't continue the story anymore until I have an answer.

Is Iliff fucking UNDERAGE ??? You gave a bulge and nsfw scenes to an underage character ?

I finished reading this visual novel in last few days and I really enjoy it. Immersed in the story and amazed by its large and complete worldview, I can say it's the best VN I've read so far. And I am always being astounded by the length of the VN and found I spent another whole daytime to finish one chapter (Due to my not-so-good English and poor vocabulary. XD), but I think it's worth it. 

The conbination of riddles and storytelling methods is really something awesome to me, for it is not very often seen in other VNs and it actually fits the story well. (sometimes it is very mind-exploding though. XD)

(!!Spoilers!!) Oh, and bug report. (not very important though XD) In Act Ⅱ, after chatting with Ongaku in cafeteria, there is a scene with five stars and text "Sacrifice". The error only occurs when you click on these stars. So to continue, (roll back if error occured) just wait for the scene change or click somewhere else. And traceback.txt here:

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
  File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 453, in execute_pause
    renpy.pause(delay)
TypeError: 'Null' object is not callable
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
  File "Chapters/Chapter_3/Chapter3_Part1.rpyc", line 204, in script call
  File "Chapters/Chapter_4/Chapter4_Part1.rpyc", line 566, in script
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\ast.py", line 2232, in execute
    self.call("execute")
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\ast.py", line 2220, in call
    return renpy.statements.call(method, parsed, *args, **kwargs)
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\statements.py", line 281, in call
    return method(parsed, *args, **kwargs)
  File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 453, in execute_pause
    renpy.pause(delay)
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\exports.py", line 1537, in pause
    rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='pause', type='pause', roll_forward=roll_forward, pause=delay, pause_modal=modal)
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\ui.py", line 299, in interact
    rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 3377, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, pause_modal=pause_modal, **kwargs) # type: ignore
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 4258, in interact_core
    rv = root_widget.event(ev, x, y, 0)
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\screen.py", line 743, in event
    rv = self.child.event(ev, x, y, st)
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event
    rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 1073, in event
    return handle_click(self.clicked)
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 1008, in handle_click
    rv = run(action)
  File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 329, in run
    return action(*args, **kwargs)
TypeError: 'Null' object is not callable
Windows-10-10.0.22621 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.0.3.22090809
Intertwined V-1.13 Remastered 1.13
Sat Aug  3 12:42:35 2024

Anyways, it's really a nice VN and I am always looking forward to the next update! Stay safe and keep marching on!

This game has reminded me of a strange saying "if fate leaves music time will die and we will have to start over" I don't remember it's origins I just remembered hearing it one day and it stuck with me for fate in music allows time to flow freely

First off, lemme start by saying this VN Is amaze-balls and I cant wait to see where this goes. As for my inquiry I’d like to know what exactly does entertaining your lust entail. I’ve replayed from chapter one 10 times and I keep missing it. Any suggestions on what to do would be great. Other than that see you next update!!!!! And keep up the good work! this is some godlike storytelling tweaks and other slight problems aside!!!!

Edit: I’m absolutely dumb lmaoooooo I found it. You my friend are a true writer lmaooooooooooooo Also ima need receipts on whence you got these songs from this some goooood shit

Just wondering has anyone made a walkthrough or wiki yet on this game

Hi, I know this is presumptuous, but I really don't know what to do, I am also a furry VN creator, my page has been published for a long time, but I just uploaded the game today, I want to know how to get my game on the "recent" page. I know it's rude to ask, but I was hoping you could help me out. I'm sorry and thank you

Thanks for your hard work on that novel, I like it a lot. The plot is amazing. I already finished Illif's content and now trying to complete Yukine's, but I have a hard time getting a devotion point for completing the trace in the right order, could you please help me out a bit?

first of all I love this game free horny therapeutic dog boys but I have some questions cause I'm having a difficult time!

In Chapter 1 how do I agree with his motives cause I'm trying to but no matter how much I try I don't get presented with the question box

and how Do I agree to get on ongakus plan to take the tunnel? it only shows me the teleporter option! 

hey ummm the coin game train scene seems to still not be working the nsfw toggle seems to work as I can get the devotion point from the talk in the room if nsfw is on but the train scene is just completely skipped.

I wanted to start off saying that this Visual Novel was enjoyable and fun to read. It was honestly a unique experience that I haven't seen in others. It is genuinely fun, a wild ride to go through, and you can see the work brimming with passion. I've been reading it with a buddy and we've been having a blast just going through chapter 1, which is surprise with how long the novel is, which is another perk.

However, there are some criticism I do have with this. Some are small and not that big of a deal, another is a bit worrying and I'll get to that shortly.

MASSIVE SPOILERS AHEAD! (not really but to be safe)

1. The font: it is very difficult to read for someone with dyslexia, it's not very viewer friendly and can even cause eyestrain. I had to go into Ren'py's font option (the A key) to change to font to comic sans to read. I'm not sure why it was chosen or what it adds, but it takes away from an otherwise really good experience.
   
2. Dialogue at the start is stilted/forced. This improves later on as the writer finds their voice and is inspiring to see how far it had vastly refined itself, and that's one of the things that's very motivational about the project is seeing you improve so well and make something really great! It's just that, I hope when you have the time, the prologue gets a bit more polishing it needs and a bit more proof reading/pacing patches.
   

NOW FOR THE BIGGEST CRITICISM OF THE GAME:

This was probably one of the moments where I had to stop reading because of how dumbstruck it left me, a visual novel that's got really inspiring quotes of doing better that feel like they're coming from a genuine place, had made a point to say that it was the victim's fault for being raped. It didn't help that it was also followed by these lines:

It ruined the scene, I mean tainted an otherwise really good character moment with the MC and even made Yukine look really, really bad. The first example was okay enough, not the greatest, but when this came right after, I couldn't believe it, even my friend couldn't. It felt weird and disjointed to where we weren't sure if this was the view of the creator filtering in, but it wasn't good. And it's a shame because it's just this one line that put me and my friends off from something that was really enjoyable. I thought it'd be good to bring it to your attention because I think it was just a poor judgment, a misstep to be precise. Again, I am really, really enjoying the VN, even my friends are as well, it's just this one line kind of dented a lot of the meaning and philosophy the writer is trying to make.

Hi, first off love the game and it's great to see a dev that's so invested in their community. Now I have a question. I can't seem to get Yukine devotion point (really cool system btw) 'Talk after choosing the right path'. Is this a glitch or could I have missed something? (I managed to get all other devotion points in the prolog and chapter one.)

uh cant get the coin game point with yukine that and i cant get the flirt point and the agree with motives point for illiff

Can anyone help me with how to get the last oganku devotion point "talk to oganku privately". I've already gone back a few times if I missed something but there isn't.

Hello author, I like this work very much, its language is very profound, but I am a player from China, my English level can be said to be worse than six or seven years old children, when I use the translator to see this work, you do not know how difficult I have, I do not expect you to launch a Chinese translation, but I hope you can single out a guide to each character ♥ And the answers to various riddles. I would appreciate it if you could fulfill my request, but this is just a complaint, and please ignore it if it adds to your workload. I really enjoy this work even if it is a non-polished translation by robots.

I need help with IIiff quest

How can I do IIoff quest 

Hey Thanks for your Help Before! sorry i didn't say it before so Thanks! but...i got another Riddles! Why!!! :'(

Help! i'm not good with riddles :'(

Hmm i got the "lie to yukine" devotion point and then when i go through the next one i get is the "defend my ideals". Im missing "complete the trace in order" can someone tell me how to get this one? There dont seem to be any choices in between there and i couldnt find any traces anymore there....

How do you talk about fate with Yukine.

Also idk if this is a bug or not but when i spoke with Yukine in the dormitory it didn't give his face with a heart next to it. 

hello! absolutely LOVE your game and how great the story is! (I'm pretty emotional so it kinda got me lol,) also, I know that this is a philosophical game but is there going to be any "intimate" or nudity scenes within the game? Other than that, I think this game is GREAT! 

Alright. This is deep, philosophical, creepy, and TOTALLY up my alley. Loving this already.

Why do xou have a grudge against ostriches?? 🤣

Potential Spoiler:

In Yukine's side story, for the last question of speaking the words the saved you. Which time exactly is it talking about? There are multiple times where Melmond gets saved and I can't seem to find the correct words for it.

The story and the characters are so good 😊 I literally cry because it can also be applied to real life events and experience.

I've enjoyed what you've made so far, though this anticipation has me in mess because I wanna know what sort of crazy shenanigans we're instore for. I can wait though since I stumbled upon this

As long as you keep us updated on your work, i dont mind the wait. If i had the money i would support you on patrion

It's quite surprising to find a visual novel game this good, i've never expected a visual novel be so down deep yet so touched when the good sentences pops up (bare with me bc i've never played a vn game like this before). The amount of effort put into this i could guess a lot or even more.

But anyway, all i wanted to say is that this game is amazing and quite interesting and touching when i kept on facing irl problems, most of the sentences just hit me right to the heart like nothing everytime i feel lost, i'm impressed on this vn for sure and i'm looking forward for more, but if that's all, it's fine, i can just restart from scratch and try every choices i did not choose.

That's all i can say, sincerely, thank you.

hello can someone help me i will quickly explain i am in chapter 2 where the main character Melmond and his friends find a portal the thing is there is a riddle here is the riddle question

A.R.M.A.:I can fill a space or a single mortal heart. If you try to distribute me, I will always leave. There are those who have me, but I cannot be shared For I only exist as one, I can never be matched

so I already tried to think of the answer but of course it was a failure so is it possible to give me either the answer or some hints :(

can someone help me with all Iliff's devotion points? 2 devotion points left and I'm already racking my brains xd

How can i get all of yukine's devotion points? I only get 6/8

Help i'm stuck on Iliff side story (T^T)

I just wanted to know, how many chapters will be in this game? It's fine if you don't know yet.

Is there any way to change the color of the text or the text box? It's quite hard to read the white text over blue.

I'm really enjoying it so far, I love your writing!!! but I feel stupid for not getting Iliff's 11 points

Has anyone got the answer to the rittle in the new build 

I love the story is really  interesting

this current iteration of the story is the best so far, it flows great and while it feels like some things are introduced too quickly the plot explains why things are happening so quickly