Xou guys did a good job of rewriting UwU while it was fine before, it's definitely better now, more immursive, and is able to pervey the feelings xou want to get across~ ^^_ I had generally good vibes as I read~ And while the implications of what's to come are daunting, I'm excited to see how xa'll will change the way this plays out :p
I have a few concerns "^^, not meaning to critique to harshly, but what happened to my Ongaku!? OwO Looks like my handsome boy ate 1ne too many chicken nuggers and gained a pair of thunder thighs! xD but... It haaas made way for something else between them thighs to grow O///O
Generally, I like the new art :) the lack of shading somehow looks better, when logically, the lack of shadows should have it lose depth, but it doesn't! n_n
My 2econd concern is the inability to change MC's name, any reason for that? :/ Not that I hate playing out as someone else, but for me, being able to use my fursona helps me immurse myself as the protagonist.
But overall, good job! :D I can tell xa'll had fun planning out how to rewrite this, and when xou're enjoying xourself, it really does translates into xour work UwU keep it up >.</