No. This was a flashback scene from two years ago. Devin disappeared when Iliff was sixteen. He is currently eighteen and in college. I do apologize if that wasn't clear, but all characters in Intertwined that have NSFW stuff attached to them are all above the age of eighteen. Iliff is eighteen, Ongaku is nineteen, the MC is eighteen, Yukine is twenty-four.
It's not clear at all indeed. You should make it more obvious, as it is now he just sounds like he's replying to a voice in his head. Thanks for clarifying.
I did read over the scene, and I do agree that the clarity is not there at all. I plan to address this for the next update to make flashback scenes more clarifying through either some text or a special screen affect.
I finished reading this visual novel in last few days and I really enjoy it. Immersed in the story and amazed by its large and complete worldview, I can say it's the best VN I've read so far. And I am always being astounded by the length of the VN and found I spent another whole daytime to finish one chapter (Due to my not-so-good English and poor vocabulary. XD), but I think it's worth it.
The conbination of riddles and storytelling methods is really something awesome to me, for it is not very often seen in other VNs and it actually fits the story well. (sometimes it is very mind-exploding though. XD)
(!!Spoilers!!) Oh, and bug report. (not very important though XD) In Act Ⅱ, after chatting with Ongaku in cafeteria, there is a scene with five stars and text "Sacrifice". The error only occurs when you click on these stars. So to continue, (roll back if error occured) just wait for the scene change or click somewhere else. And traceback.txt here:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 453, in execute_pause
renpy.pause(delay)
TypeError: 'Null' object is not callable
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "Chapters/Chapter_3/Chapter3_Part1.rpyc", line 204, in script call
File "Chapters/Chapter_4/Chapter4_Part1.rpyc", line 566, in script
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\ast.py", line 2232, in execute
self.call("execute")
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\ast.py", line 2220, in call
return renpy.statements.call(method, parsed, *args, **kwargs)
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\statements.py", line 281, in call
return method(parsed, *args, **kwargs)
File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 453, in execute_pause
renpy.pause(delay)
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\exports.py", line 1537, in pause
rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='pause', type='pause', roll_forward=roll_forward, pause=delay, pause_modal=modal)
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\ui.py", line 299, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 3377, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, pause_modal=pause_modal, **kwargs) # type: ignore
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 4258, in interact_core
rv = root_widget.event(ev, x, y, 0)
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\screen.py", line 743, in event
rv = self.child.event(ev, x, y, st)
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 1073, in event
return handle_click(self.clicked)
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 1008, in handle_click
rv = run(action)
File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 329, in run
return action(*args, **kwargs)
TypeError: 'Null' object is not callable
Windows-10-10.0.22621 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.0.3.22090809
Intertwined V-1.13 Remastered 1.13
Sat Aug 3 12:42:35 2024
Anyways, it's really a nice VN and I am always looking forward to the next update! Stay safe and keep marching on!
Thank you and im super glad that you love the game! I do know of this error and I will be fixing it during the next update that does a bunch of overhauls to clean up the game to where I want it to be! Sorry for that error, I didn't catch it in my testing originally.
This game has reminded me of a strange saying "if fate leaves music time will die and we will have to start over" I don't remember it's origins I just remembered hearing it one day and it stuck with me for fate in music allows time to flow freely
First off, lemme start by saying this VN Is amaze-balls and I cant wait to see where this goes. As for my inquiry I’d like to know what exactly does entertaining your lust entail. I’ve replayed from chapter one 10 times and I keep missing it. Any suggestions on what to do would be great. Other than that see you next update!!!!! And keep up the good work! this is some godlike storytelling tweaks and other slight problems aside!!!!
Edit: I’m absolutely dumb lmaoooooo I found it.
You my friend are a true writer lmaooooooooooooo
Also ima need receipts on whence you got these songs from this some goooood shit
Haha well thank you! I am super glad that you are enjoying the game. The next update is a pretty big overhaul of the first act as it really cleans up a lot of the writing and tightens it up so that the characters are much more in-line with where the story is going towards. This will also fix to make the devotion points a lot easier to find and get.
As for the songs, they are some freebie songs I found around aside from the last song in the end. That was a custom song made for Intertwined. I plan to actually replace all the music with custom music made by my musician friend. Still a bit out in development for that!
Stay tuned for more. We are just getting started haha!
Not to my knowledge. My goal is to make a much better in game guide for everything in the next update. That way, you don't need an external document for it.
Hi, I know this is presumptuous, but I really don't know what to do, I am also a furry VN creator, my page has been published for a long time, but I just uploaded the game today, I want to know how to get my game on the "recent" page. I know it's rude to ask, but I was hoping you could help me out. I'm sorry and thank you
By the way, I really enjoyed your game and look forward to your updates, and I hope to see more of Yukine's story because I love this character the most. This may seem like flattery, but I really like it
Hi hi! So, the recent pages, as far as I am aware, has to do with the amount of people who click the game and who download it. It isn't something you specifically can do so much as how much interaction it gets. I do believe the best way to do this is to advertise your itch link in other places such as social media. It should help widen that reach.
I am glad you're liking the game! I plan to improve on all the character's stories once the re-writes are done for the first act!
Thank you for your reply, which is very helpful. I am looking forward to the new game content, please come on, and pay attention to health and don't overwork.
Thanks for your hard work on that novel, I like it a lot. The plot is amazing. I already finished Illif's content and now trying to complete Yukine's, but I have a hard time getting a devotion point for completing the trace in the right order, could you please help me out a bit?
Hello! I am glad you're enjoying the novel. For the trace devotion point in Chapter 3. You need to only force through the field once. After the first time, stay back. This will trigger the proper scene to allow you to get the devotion point from Yukine.
By the way, there are a lot of moments where MC flirts with main characters and vice versa. Are we going to see some romantic relationships as well as some juicy scenes in the future?
Yes. Intertwined is a very slow burn story where we build up those relationships, have strife and disagreements, and overall, just giving the characters time to fully embrace who they are and what they like. It will definitely happen!
Thanks! I am glad your enjoying it. For Iliff's devotion, you can only get this if you fully failed the coin toss game on the train. NSFW mode has to be on for this. If you did this and have 2 devotion points, you'll get a menu choice and you have to say that hes jealous of Yukine.
In Chapter 1, you have to take the train as one of the choose your fates. If you take the teleporter, it will lock the tunnel option.
hey ummm the coin game train scene seems to still not be working the nsfw toggle seems to work as I can get the devotion point from the talk in the room if nsfw is on but the train scene is just completely skipped.
I wanted to start off saying that this Visual Novel was enjoyable and fun to read. It was honestly a unique experience that I haven't seen in others. It is genuinely fun, a wild ride to go through, and you can see the work brimming with passion. I've been reading it with a buddy and we've been having a blast just going through chapter 1, which is surprise with how long the novel is, which is another perk.
However, there are some criticism I do have with this. Some are small and not that big of a deal, another is a bit worrying and I'll get to that shortly.
MASSIVE SPOILERS AHEAD! (not really but to be safe)
The font: it is very difficult to read for someone with dyslexia, it's not very viewer friendly and can even cause eyestrain. I had to go into Ren'py's font option (the A key) to change to font to comic sans to read. I'm not sure why it was chosen or what it adds, but it takes away from an otherwise really good experience.
Dialogue at the start is stilted/forced. This improves later on as the writer finds their voice and is inspiring to see how far it had vastly refined itself, and that's one of the things that's very motivational about the project is seeing you improve so well and make something really great! It's just that, I hope when you have the time, the prologue gets a bit more polishing it needs and a bit more proof reading/pacing patches.
NOW FOR THE BIGGEST CRITICISM OF THE GAME:
This was probably one of the moments where I had to stop reading because of how dumbstruck it left me, a visual novel that's got really inspiring quotes of doing better that feel like they're coming from a genuine place, had made a point to say that it was the victim's fault for being raped. It didn't help that it was also followed by these lines:
It ruined the scene, I mean tainted an otherwise really good character moment with the MC and even made Yukine look really, really bad. The first example was okay enough, not the greatest, but when this came right after, I couldn't believe it, even my friend couldn't. It felt weird and disjointed to where we weren't sure if this was the view of the creator filtering in, but it wasn't good. And it's a shame because it's just this one line that put me and my friends off from something that was really enjoyable. I thought it'd be good to bring it to your attention because I think it was just a poor judgment, a misstep to be precise. Again, I am really, really enjoying the VN, even my friends are as well, it's just this one line kind of dented a lot of the meaning and philosophy the writer is trying to make.
hi hi and thank you for the comments and the criticism. The view from that scene is definitely not of my own. I even had a few second guesses when adding in that scene and the verbiage because of the fact that Yukine as a character has lived for so very long he has a very darkened view of the world for reasons that open up later. He was suppose to be painted as a not very caring character until later on but I can see why this scene would cause some issues to read.
That being said, I will take a look at going back and reviewing the scene to try and make it portray the correct intentions without sounding so dark. Thank you for bringing this to my attention and I will do what I can to rectify this mistake in writing!
Hi, first off love the game and it's great to see a dev that's so invested in their community. Now I have a question. I can't seem to get Yukine devotion point (really cool system btw) 'Talk after choosing the right path'. Is this a glitch or could I have missed something? (I managed to get all other devotion points in the prolog and chapter one.)
hi hi! Thank you for the compliments! I am out of state right now and don’t actually remember all the path choices by heart there’s quite a few but once I get back I can update this with how to get that point! Sorry for that :c
Sorry I had to get back to the code to check it over. During the first Chapter when you get to the part where you have to choose to give in to the corruption or resist it, follow this:
Give in to the corruption
- "If your so concerned about my body language, you don't portray it well"
Would you not say that is a valid hypothesis?
- "Yes."
Converse with Yukine
That should get you to the devotion point your looking for.
Can anyone help me with how to get the last oganku devotion point "talk to oganku privately". I've already gone back a few times if I missed something but there isn't.
This devotion will only trigger if you have 7 devotion points prior to reaching this scene. During the scene where Iliff complains about Cecilia in Yukine's fake world, you need to choose the "Okay. I get it." choice and if you have the required devotion, it will trigger the scene for this one. You need to choose that you believe in it in order to get this devotion in that scene.
Thank you very much, could I ask another question? In question, the scene with the coin on the train, does it have any action to happen? I remember that you have to look for Iliff and Yukine to happen, but that option doesn't even appear for me anymore, it just says that I arrived at angel heights. I'm going after all of Yukine's devotion points this time.
In an old save of mine it does, however only if the nfsw is neither activated nor deactivated (neither of which is white), if I activate it before this scene it doesn't happen, so there is no way to start a new save to activate the nfsw to gain Yukine's point before and then have the train scene. or am I doing something wrong.
but in a new one, if it is neither active nor deactivated, the scene does not occur as in the old save, if it is like this, would it be a bug?
Yes. I recently updated the NSFW switch. Due to this, you need to go into preferences and make sure you re-toggle it. It is off by default which will skip that scene. I forgot to add that in my patch notes.
the scene with Yukine talking about the fate is ok because I activated nfsw, however the train scene does not activate. Then I tried to deactivate it before the train scene, but it still doesn't work just Skip the scene.(Sorry to bother you with this).
I'm going to load my old save so I can get the train scene.
Hello author, I like this work very much, its language is very profound, but I am a player from China, my English level can be said to be worse than six or seven years old children, when I use the translator to see this work, you do not know how difficult I have, I do not expect you to launch a Chinese translation, but I hope you can single out a guide to each character ♥ And the answers to various riddles. I would appreciate it if you could fulfill my request, but this is just a complaint, and please ignore it if it adds to your workload. I really enjoy this work even if it is a non-polished translation by robots.
Hello and yeah I do apologize that there is only an english version at this moment. If you need help with any of the riddles I can easily help. For right now the following answers will assist. ARMA riddle : Stars 1st Chapter riddle: Time 2nd Chapter riddle: Loneliness 3rd Chapter riddle: Abandonment
Hmm i got the "lie to yukine" devotion point and then when i go through the next one i get is the "defend my ideals". Im missing "complete the trace in order" can someone tell me how to get this one? There dont seem to be any choices in between there and i couldnt find any traces anymore there....
This would be the trace in the basement just before you enter the room with all the debris. During this trace there’s choices to continue on or to hold back. You need to hold back once you reach the door. This trace only can be activated when the corruption says to trace. Very small window to do it.
After some more searching i found it! Also found the one at kurbelthors hideout which yukine created to trach mel a lesson while looking for the missing trace haha
That one though doesnt seem to have any major impact on anything am i right? Im no asking for exact locations but are there any more traces at random places that dont really matter in terms of devotion points or plot and are just there for lore or background info like the one at the hideout? I mean you could totally miss that one and i dont see any downside to it...
Yeah there's a few traces spread out through Chapter 3. They are mostly for lore dumps but a few can have accompanying devotion points. Later on, I plan to make another page in the Star-Chart to track the traces, just have not gotten to it yet. There are no traces in the new update since you can't have a trace in a world created by magic.
Intertwined has a bunch of hidden paths that don't trigger unless certain events are completed. You may have spoken to him in the dorm, but if the triggers were not met it would not trigger the specific branch to get his devotion point.
For the fate devotion point you need to already have obtained the point prior in the prologue which will trigger the scene. Afterwards you have to confront him and then ask about the future.
Could i have a hint on the prologue like what the first decision I should make cause i have been at it for about 30 mins and that hint would help me enough for me to figure it out by myself.
Well first and foremost you need to make sure that you have NSFW turned on. Make sure the text in the options is lit up. If it is not, the devotion system does not work properly. 2nd. The hint is you think Yukine looks fine as he is. You will understand what that means if you decide to talk with Yukine.
hello! absolutely LOVE your game and how great the story is! (I'm pretty emotional so it kinda got me lol,) also, I know that this is a philosophical game but is there going to be any "intimate" or nudity scenes within the game? Other than that, I think this game is GREAT!
Im glad your enjoying the game! Yes, there actually is some already. One notable scene is within Yukine's side story. The game is a slow burn due to the nature of the story but there will be nsfw.
In Yukine's side story, for the last question of speaking the words the saved you. Which time exactly is it talking about? There are multiple times where Melmond gets saved and I can't seem to find the correct words for it.
Ok. So, same subject. (Sorry for bothering you again with this.) But I've tried going though the story again and I can't find the words for it. Is it possible for you to give me a list of moments where the words are said, or (If its too much hassle to go make said list) for you to give me the words. Sorry again for bothering you with this.
I've enjoyed what you've made so far, though this anticipation has me in mess because I wanna know what sort of crazy shenanigans we're instore for. I can wait though since I stumbled upon this
I definitely will try to. I know I have been pretty bad about updating the progress which I will try very hard to keep everyone in the loop going forward.
I know keeping everyone posted can be hard. I also know that working with renply takes a lot of patience as well. Trust I want to make my own vn but I am not a good artist and I don't have the money to pay anyone to do the art work for me. Not to mention I have a 15 year old laptop that I write a book on, play multiple visual novels, and try making 3d models so I can make animated videos using while have a job from 8am - 2 pm 5 days a week and practicing the piano and trying to stream. I try to do a lot at once. Luckily I can with my adhd.
Oh man. That is a lot of stuff to do all at once. I have a normal job on top of the VN and several other stuff. My ADHD works against me sadly and makes me forget to do a lot of things like keep people up to date so it is a constant battle to keep myself in line with everything going on.
Im always hyper because of my adhd but i learned to control it for the most part but my adhd also effects my attention to stuff. If i start focusing on anything then i wont notice anything else. If i dont focus on anything then i space out
It's quite surprising to find a visual novel game this good, i've never expected a visual novel be so down deep yet so touched when the good sentences pops up (bare with me bc i've never played a vn game like this before). The amount of effort put into this i could guess a lot or even more.
But anyway, all i wanted to say is that this game is amazing and quite interesting and touching when i kept on facing irl problems, most of the sentences just hit me right to the heart like nothing everytime i feel lost, i'm impressed on this vn for sure and i'm looking forward for more, but if that's all, it's fine, i can just restart from scratch and try every choices i did not choose.
I am so glad you’re enjoying the game and I will keep doing my best to bring more quality updates to the table. Yukine’s second devotion point is a troublesome one to get due to requiring a string of correct choices to trigger it.
You're always welcome, and for the devotion points, i guess all i have to do is try to backtrack which choices i might've missed or didn't get chosen and hope luck is on my side.
For now, yes. I am working on some new QoL changes that will help with hints and trackers for the devotion points. I just have been trying to sort out the code for the star-chart since when I made it, it was hastily coded and kind of a mess.
i see, well i don't want to interrupt you further so i just want to say thank you for responding to my and other people's comments despite focusing on developing the game further and facing our greatest enemy which is life itself with difficult obstacles to pass through, but i have hope on you that you can make it through, that's all from me, again, thank you from my heart.
hello can someone help me i will quickly explain i am in chapter 2 where the main character Melmond and his friends find a portal the thing is there is a riddle here is the riddle question
A.R.M.A.:I can fill a space or a single mortal heart. If you try to distribute me, I will always leave. There are those who have me, but I cannot be shared For I only exist as one, I can never be matched
so I already tried to think of the answer but of course it was a failure so is it possible to give me either the answer or some hints :(
Sorry I did not see this. I am planning to make a way to track which devotion points you missed as it is tricky to find them all with how many hidden paths exist in the game already. Bare with me and I will try to get this particular update out quickly.
Well, it looks like there may be a bug here. There is only 7 released devotion points after checking the files. The last one is in the side story that I did not finish yet. Here is a small guide though to help.
Yukine Devotion Point Locations
------------------------------- 1 - Coin Toss Game 2 - Converse with Yukine after having selected very specific choices after meeting back up with everyone from exploring Angel Heights with Iliff. 3 - Select a specific set of responses while speaking to Yukine in Angel Heights after everyone else has disappeared. 4 - "A little help never hurt" - Choose this at the end of Chapter 1. 5 - Talk about those 'parts' in the beginning of Chapter 2 6 - Answer correctly to Yukine's question about time. 7 - Correctly answer all the trial questions with Yukine when he's talking through the orb. 8 - [Not released] Complete the questions all correctly
Ah, you need to answer the questions all correctly based on the events that happened. It will eventually mention the doodles on the letter that you received from your mother and that will spell out the password.
For ease of the situation since you were stuck on it, I will write the password here if you do not want to go through the hassle of trying to poke through the parts of the side story again.
Password: Stars or stars Either or is acceptable for the scene to progress.
My goal was 24. This only applies to the main story. The side-stories are separate. This number can change depending on how the story branches out and how the writing goes.
Haha thank you! It's tricky to get all the devotion points since some of them are in very obscure places and there's several branching paths that exist which some won't even show up if you don't have prior points so it's actually a pretty complex system. I was thinking of making a guide for it in the future to be honest. So, don't beat yourself up for missing some!
this current iteration of the story is the best so far, it flows great and while it feels like some things are introduced too quickly the plot explains why things are happening so quickly
I’m glad you’re enjoying it. Yeah the speed of introducing things is a hard balance when it comes to stories with plot points that put the characters on a timer essentially. Hopefully the next updates to come balance things out a bit better c:
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I have a question to Yukines Star chart... In chapter 1, how Do I Get the Star for the „Talk after choosing the right paths"
Thanks for the nice game^^
Is Iliff fucking UNDERAGE ??? You gave a bulge and nsfw scenes to an underage character ?
No. This was a flashback scene from two years ago. Devin disappeared when Iliff was sixteen. He is currently eighteen and in college. I do apologize if that wasn't clear, but all characters in Intertwined that have NSFW stuff attached to them are all above the age of eighteen.
Iliff is eighteen, Ongaku is nineteen, the MC is eighteen, Yukine is twenty-four.
It's not clear at all indeed. You should make it more obvious, as it is now he just sounds like he's replying to a voice in his head. Thanks for clarifying.
Not a problem at all.
I did read over the scene, and I do agree that the clarity is not there at all. I plan to address this for the next update to make flashback scenes more clarifying through either some text or a special screen affect.
I finished reading this visual novel in last few days and I really enjoy it. Immersed in the story and amazed by its large and complete worldview, I can say it's the best VN I've read so far. And I am always being astounded by the length of the VN and found I spent another whole daytime to finish one chapter (Due to my not-so-good English and poor vocabulary. XD), but I think it's worth it.
The conbination of riddles and storytelling methods is really something awesome to me, for it is not very often seen in other VNs and it actually fits the story well. (sometimes it is very mind-exploding though. XD)
(!!Spoilers!!) Oh, and bug report. (not very important though XD) In Act Ⅱ, after chatting with Ongaku in cafeteria, there is a scene with five stars and text "Sacrifice".
The error only occurs when you click on these stars. So to continue, (roll back if error occured) just wait for the scene change or click somewhere else. And traceback.txt here:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred. While running game code: File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 453, in execute_pause renpy.pause(delay) TypeError: 'Null' object is not callable -- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------ Full traceback: File "Chapters/Chapter_3/Chapter3_Part1.rpyc", line 204, in script call File "Chapters/Chapter_4/Chapter4_Part1.rpyc", line 566, in script File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\ast.py", line 2232, in execute self.call("execute") File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\ast.py", line 2220, in call return renpy.statements.call(method, parsed, *args, **kwargs) File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\statements.py", line 281, in call return method(parsed, *args, **kwargs) File "renpy/common/000statements.rpy", line 453, in execute_pause renpy.pause(delay) File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\exports.py", line 1537, in pause rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='pause', type='pause', roll_forward=roll_forward, pause=delay, pause_modal=modal) File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\ui.py", line 299, in interact rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs) File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 3377, in interact repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, pause_modal=pause_modal, **kwargs) # type: ignore File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\core.py", line 4258, in interact_core rv = root_widget.event(ev, x, y, 0) File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst) File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst) File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst) File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\screen.py", line 743, in event rv = self.child.event(ev, x, y, st) File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst) File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst) File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1175, in event rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst) File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 1073, in event return handle_click(self.clicked) File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 1008, in handle_click rv = run(action) File "D:\Files\Games\Intertwined-1.13-win\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 329, in run return action(*args, **kwargs) TypeError: 'Null' object is not callable Windows-10-10.0.22621 AMD64 Ren'Py 8.0.3.22090809 Intertwined V-1.13 Remastered 1.13 Sat Aug 3 12:42:35 2024Anyways, it's really a nice VN and I am always looking forward to the next update! Stay safe and keep marching on!
Thank you and im super glad that you love the game! I do know of this error and I will be fixing it during the next update that does a bunch of overhauls to clean up the game to where I want it to be! Sorry for that error, I didn't catch it in my testing originally.
That's okay. Take your time. :)
This game has reminded me of a strange saying "if fate leaves music time will die and we will have to start over" I don't remember it's origins I just remembered hearing it one day and it stuck with me for fate in music allows time to flow freely
Huh. That is a rather interesting saying that seems to link with almost all the main cast. Almost like the saying was made for the story haha.
it is slightly strange... But like I'm pretty sure it pertains to tarot cards which makes this even weirder
Gotta love the weird!
Always love the weird
First off, lemme start by saying this VN Is amaze-balls and I cant wait to see where this goes. As for my inquiry I’d like to know what exactly does entertaining your lust entail. I’ve replayed from chapter one 10 times and I keep missing it. Any suggestions on what to do would be great. Other than that see you next update!!!!! And keep up the good work! this is some godlike storytelling tweaks and other slight problems aside!!!!
Edit: I’m absolutely dumb lmaoooooo I found it. You my friend are a true writer lmaooooooooooooo Also ima need receipts on whence you got these songs from this some goooood shit
Haha well thank you! I am super glad that you are enjoying the game. The next update is a pretty big overhaul of the first act as it really cleans up a lot of the writing and tightens it up so that the characters are much more in-line with where the story is going towards. This will also fix to make the devotion points a lot easier to find and get.
As for the songs, they are some freebie songs I found around aside from the last song in the end. That was a custom song made for Intertwined. I plan to actually replace all the music with custom music made by my musician friend. Still a bit out in development for that!
Stay tuned for more. We are just getting started haha!
Just wondering has anyone made a walkthrough or wiki yet on this game
Not to my knowledge. My goal is to make a much better in game guide for everything in the next update. That way, you don't need an external document for it.
Hi, I know this is presumptuous, but I really don't know what to do, I am also a furry VN creator, my page has been published for a long time, but I just uploaded the game today, I want to know how to get my game on the "recent" page. I know it's rude to ask, but I was hoping you could help me out. I'm sorry and thank you
By the way, I really enjoyed your game and look forward to your updates, and I hope to see more of Yukine's story because I love this character the most. This may seem like flattery, but I really like it
Hi hi! So, the recent pages, as far as I am aware, has to do with the amount of people who click the game and who download it. It isn't something you specifically can do so much as how much interaction it gets. I do believe the best way to do this is to advertise your itch link in other places such as social media. It should help widen that reach.
I am glad you're liking the game! I plan to improve on all the character's stories once the re-writes are done for the first act!
Thank you for your reply, which is very helpful. I am looking forward to the new game content, please come on, and pay attention to health and don't overwork.
Thanks for your hard work on that novel, I like it a lot. The plot is amazing. I already finished Illif's content and now trying to complete Yukine's, but I have a hard time getting a devotion point for completing the trace in the right order, could you please help me out a bit?
Hello! I am glad you're enjoying the novel. For the trace devotion point in Chapter 3. You need to only force through the field once. After the first time, stay back. This will trigger the proper scene to allow you to get the devotion point from Yukine.
Ohhhh a bit tricky yeah, no wonder I didn't notice. Thanks a lot :D
By the way, there are a lot of moments where MC flirts with main characters and vice versa. Are we going to see some romantic relationships as well as some juicy scenes in the future?
Yes. Intertwined is a very slow burn story where we build up those relationships, have strife and disagreements, and overall, just giving the characters time to fully embrace who they are and what they like. It will definitely happen!
Sounds real good! Thanks for your answers! <3
first of all I love this game free horny therapeutic dog boys but I have some questions cause I'm having a difficult time!
In Chapter 1 how do I agree with his motives cause I'm trying to but no matter how much I try I don't get presented with the question box
and how Do I agree to get on ongakus plan to take the tunnel? it only shows me the teleporter option!
Thanks! I am glad your enjoying it.
For Iliff's devotion, you can only get this if you fully failed the coin toss game on the train. NSFW mode has to be on for this. If you did this and have 2 devotion points, you'll get a menu choice and you have to say that hes jealous of Yukine.
In Chapter 1, you have to take the train as one of the choose your fates. If you take the teleporter, it will lock the tunnel option.
hey ummm the coin game train scene seems to still not be working the nsfw toggle seems to work as I can get the devotion point from the talk in the room if nsfw is on but the train scene is just completely skipped.
Hmmm. Okay Let me take another look at why it seems to be breaking. It may be a different code causing issues now.
I wanted to start off saying that this Visual Novel was enjoyable and fun to read. It was honestly a unique experience that I haven't seen in others. It is genuinely fun, a wild ride to go through, and you can see the work brimming with passion. I've been reading it with a buddy and we've been having a blast just going through chapter 1, which is surprise with how long the novel is, which is another perk.
However, there are some criticism I do have with this. Some are small and not that big of a deal, another is a bit worrying and I'll get to that shortly.
MASSIVE SPOILERS AHEAD! (not really but to be safe)
NOW FOR THE BIGGEST CRITICISM OF THE GAME:
This was probably one of the moments where I had to stop reading because of how dumbstruck it left me, a visual novel that's got really inspiring quotes of doing better that feel like they're coming from a genuine place, had made a point to say that it was the victim's fault for being raped. It didn't help that it was also followed by these lines:
It ruined the scene, I mean tainted an otherwise really good character moment with the MC and even made Yukine look really, really bad. The first example was okay enough, not the greatest, but when this came right after, I couldn't believe it, even my friend couldn't. It felt weird and disjointed to where we weren't sure if this was the view of the creator filtering in, but it wasn't good. And it's a shame because it's just this one line that put me and my friends off from something that was really enjoyable. I thought it'd be good to bring it to your attention because I think it was just a poor judgment, a misstep to be precise. Again, I am really, really enjoying the VN, even my friends are as well, it's just this one line kind of dented a lot of the meaning and philosophy the writer is trying to make.
hi hi and thank you for the comments and the criticism. The view from that scene is definitely not of my own. I even had a few second guesses when adding in that scene and the verbiage because of the fact that Yukine as a character has lived for so very long he has a very darkened view of the world for reasons that open up later. He was suppose to be painted as a not very caring character until later on but I can see why this scene would cause some issues to read.
That being said, I will take a look at going back and reviewing the scene to try and make it portray the correct intentions without sounding so dark. Thank you for bringing this to my attention and I will do what I can to rectify this mistake in writing!
Hi, first off love the game and it's great to see a dev that's so invested in their community. Now I have a question. I can't seem to get Yukine devotion point (really cool system btw) 'Talk after choosing the right path'. Is this a glitch or could I have missed something? (I managed to get all other devotion points in the prolog and chapter one.)
hi hi! Thank you for the compliments! I am out of state right now and don’t actually remember all the path choices by heart there’s quite a few but once I get back I can update this with how to get that point! Sorry for that :c
Sorry I had to get back to the code to check it over. During the first Chapter when you get to the part where you have to choose to give in to the corruption or resist it, follow this:
Give in to the corruption
- "If your so concerned about my body language, you don't portray it well"
Would you not say that is a valid hypothesis?
- "Yes."
Converse with Yukine
That should get you to the devotion point your looking for.
Thanks my dude
uh cant get the coin game point with yukine that and i cant get the flirt point and the agree with motives point for illiff
Yes sorry about this. There’s a bug with some scenes I’m working to fix. I’ll try to get a hotfix out soon.
Can anyone help me with how to get the last oganku devotion point "talk to oganku privately". I've already gone back a few times if I missed something but there isn't.
This devotion will only trigger if you have 7 devotion points prior to reaching this scene. During the scene where Iliff complains about Cecilia in Yukine's fake world, you need to choose the "Okay. I get it." choice and if you have the required devotion, it will trigger the scene for this one. You need to choose that you believe in it in order to get this devotion in that scene.
Thank you very much, could I ask another question? In question, the scene with the coin on the train, does it have any action to happen? I remember that you have to look for Iliff and Yukine to happen, but that option doesn't even appear for me anymore, it just says that I arrived at angel heights. I'm going after all of Yukine's devotion points this time.
In an old save of mine it does, however only if the nfsw is neither activated nor deactivated (neither of which is white), if I activate it before this scene it doesn't happen, so there is no way to start a new save to activate the nfsw to gain Yukine's point before and then have the train scene. or am I doing something wrong.
but in a new one, if it is neither active nor deactivated, the scene does not occur as in the old save, if it is like this, would it be a bug?
Obs:Android.
Yes. I recently updated the NSFW switch. Due to this, you need to go into preferences and make sure you re-toggle it. It is off by default which will skip that scene. I forgot to add that in my patch notes.
the scene with Yukine talking about the fate is ok because I activated nfsw, however the train scene does not activate. Then I tried to deactivate it before the train scene, but it still doesn't work just Skip the scene.(Sorry to bother you with this).
I'm going to load my old save so I can get the train scene.
Hello author, I like this work very much, its language is very profound, but I am a player from China, my English level can be said to be worse than six or seven years old children, when I use the translator to see this work, you do not know how difficult I have, I do not expect you to launch a Chinese translation, but I hope you can single out a guide to each character ♥ And the answers to various riddles. I would appreciate it if you could fulfill my request, but this is just a complaint, and please ignore it if it adds to your workload. I really enjoy this work even if it is a non-polished translation by robots.
Consciousness is what I translated into English with a translator, and I'm sorry if it's ambiguous, but I really love this work
Hello and yeah I do apologize that there is only an english version at this moment. If you need help with any of the riddles I can easily help. For right now the following answers will assist.
ARMA riddle : Stars
1st Chapter riddle: Time
2nd Chapter riddle: Loneliness
3rd Chapter riddle: Abandonment
Let me know if this helps at all.
This is very helpful. Thank you for your answer
No problem.
I need help with IIiff quest
Which part are you stuck on exactly?
the computer password
stars
one last thing how get lliff love all the way to 8
The Star-Chart should list all of the places that you can get his points.
Does anyone know how to flirt with IIiff and the other one
How can I do IIoff quest
If you mean his side story, you can access it once you finish the main story and open the Star chart from the headspace.
Ok
What about this one
search the back of the auditorium and use the trace power.
thank you so much what about this one sorry
Hey Thanks for your Help Before! sorry i didn't say it before so Thanks! but...i got another Riddles! Why!!! :'(
This game does have a lot of riddles. Abandonment should be the answer for this one.
Help! i'm not good with riddles :'(
loneliness is the answer.
Hmm i got the "lie to yukine" devotion point and then when i go through the next one i get is the "defend my ideals". Im missing "complete the trace in order" can someone tell me how to get this one? There dont seem to be any choices in between there and i couldnt find any traces anymore there....
This would be the trace in the basement just before you enter the room with all the debris. During this trace there’s choices to continue on or to hold back. You need to hold back once you reach the door. This trace only can be activated when the corruption says to trace. Very small window to do it.
Oh okay! I remember that when the corruption was talking about tracing but i must have missed the window then, thanks alot!
No problem!
After some more searching i found it! Also found the one at kurbelthors hideout which yukine created to trach mel a lesson while looking for the missing trace haha
That one though doesnt seem to have any major impact on anything am i right? Im no asking for exact locations but are there any more traces at random places that dont really matter in terms of devotion points or plot and are just there for lore or background info like the one at the hideout? I mean you could totally miss that one and i dont see any downside to it...
Yeah there's a few traces spread out through Chapter 3. They are mostly for lore dumps but a few can have accompanying devotion points. Later on, I plan to make another page in the Star-Chart to track the traces, just have not gotten to it yet. There are no traces in the new update since you can't have a trace in a world created by magic.
How do you talk about fate with Yukine.
Also idk if this is a bug or not but when i spoke with Yukine in the dormitory it didn't give his face with a heart next to it.
Intertwined has a bunch of hidden paths that don't trigger unless certain events are completed. You may have spoken to him in the dorm, but if the triggers were not met it would not trigger the specific branch to get his devotion point.
For the fate devotion point you need to already have obtained the point prior in the prologue which will trigger the scene. Afterwards you have to confront him and then ask about the future.
Could i have a hint on the prologue like what the first decision I should make cause i have been at it for about 30 mins and that hint would help me enough for me to figure it out by myself.
Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck why do there have to be so many combinations I just want to 100% Yukines path
Well first and foremost you need to make sure that you have NSFW turned on. Make sure the text in the options is lit up. If it is not, the devotion system does not work properly.
2nd. The hint is you think Yukine looks fine as he is. You will understand what that means if you decide to talk with Yukine.
Thx
hello! absolutely LOVE your game and how great the story is! (I'm pretty emotional so it kinda got me lol,) also, I know that this is a philosophical game but is there going to be any "intimate" or nudity scenes within the game? Other than that, I think this game is GREAT!
Im glad your enjoying the game! Yes, there actually is some already. One notable scene is within Yukine's side story. The game is a slow burn due to the nature of the story but there will be nsfw.
Alright. This is deep, philosophical, creepy, and TOTALLY up my alley. Loving this already.
I’m very glad you’re enjoying it so far! Even more crazy shenanigans to come.
Why do xou have a grudge against ostriches?? 🤣
haha it’s a running joke between myself and my proofreader so we just rolled with it.
Heh, well they are devilish birds 😉 in a single day, I watched 1ne steal my chips and throw my friend from her back 😅
That is very true haha! If you aren't careful they will peck you!
Potential Spoiler:
In Yukine's side story, for the last question of speaking the words the saved you. Which time exactly is it talking about? There are multiple times where Melmond gets saved and I can't seem to find the correct words for it.
So this refers to his past. The scene that showed him as a kid. There should be three words that are mentioned a couple times in the VN.
Thanks.
Ok. So, same subject. (Sorry for bothering you again with this.) But I've tried going though the story again and I can't find the words for it. Is it possible for you to give me a list of moments where the words are said, or (If its too much hassle to go make said list) for you to give me the words. Sorry again for bothering you with this.
Keep marching on are the words in question. That question was designed to actually be really hard so thats why its a tricky one to get right.
Thank you. And sorry again for bothering you with this.
The story and the characters are so good 😊 I literally cry because it can also be applied to real life events and experience.
That was the goal of this story to reflect real life closely minus the magic of course haha. Glad your enjoying it!
I've enjoyed what you've made so far, though this anticipation has me in mess because I wanna know what sort of crazy shenanigans we're instore for. I can wait though since I stumbled upon this
Haha I am glad that your enjoying it and don't worry a new update is coming soon!
As long as you keep us updated on your work, i dont mind the wait. If i had the money i would support you on patrion
I definitely will try to. I know I have been pretty bad about updating the progress which I will try very hard to keep everyone in the loop going forward.
I know keeping everyone posted can be hard. I also know that working with renply takes a lot of patience as well. Trust I want to make my own vn but I am not a good artist and I don't have the money to pay anyone to do the art work for me. Not to mention I have a 15 year old laptop that I write a book on, play multiple visual novels, and try making 3d models so I can make animated videos using while have a job from 8am - 2 pm 5 days a week and practicing the piano and trying to stream. I try to do a lot at once. Luckily I can with my adhd.
Oh man. That is a lot of stuff to do all at once. I have a normal job on top of the VN and several other stuff. My ADHD works against me sadly and makes me forget to do a lot of things like keep people up to date so it is a constant battle to keep myself in line with everything going on.
Im always hyper because of my adhd but i learned to control it for the most part but my adhd also effects my attention to stuff. If i start focusing on anything then i wont notice anything else. If i dont focus on anything then i space out
Same here. I do need to keep focus pretty consistently or before I know it several hours have passed by and I have done 0 work.
It's quite surprising to find a visual novel game this good, i've never expected a visual novel be so down deep yet so touched when the good sentences pops up (bare with me bc i've never played a vn game like this before). The amount of effort put into this i could guess a lot or even more.
But anyway, all i wanted to say is that this game is amazing and quite interesting and touching when i kept on facing irl problems, most of the sentences just hit me right to the heart like nothing everytime i feel lost, i'm impressed on this vn for sure and i'm looking forward for more, but if that's all, it's fine, i can just restart from scratch and try every choices i did not choose.
That's all i can say, sincerely, thank you.
sorry if my words and sentences are not clear xd
(i'm also suffering trying to get the second devotion point on Yukine bc i'm stupid lol)
I am so glad you’re enjoying the game and I will keep doing my best to bring more quality updates to the table. Yukine’s second devotion point is a troublesome one to get due to requiring a string of correct choices to trigger it.
You're always welcome, and for the devotion points, i guess all i have to do is try to backtrack which choices i might've missed or didn't get chosen and hope luck is on my side.
Again, thank you.
For now, yes. I am working on some new QoL changes that will help with hints and trackers for the devotion points. I just have been trying to sort out the code for the star-chart since when I made it, it was hastily coded and kind of a mess.
i see, well i don't want to interrupt you further so i just want to say thank you for responding to my and other people's comments despite focusing on developing the game further and facing our greatest enemy which is life itself with difficult obstacles to pass through, but i have hope on you that you can make it through, that's all from me, again, thank you from my heart.
hello can someone help me i will quickly explain i am in chapter 2 where the main character Melmond and his friends find a portal the thing is there is a riddle here is the riddle question
A.R.M.A.:I can fill a space or a single mortal heart. If you try to distribute me, I will always leave. There are those who have me, but I cannot be shared For I only exist as one, I can never be matched
so I already tried to think of the answer but of course it was a failure so is it possible to give me either the answer or some hints :(
For ease, I will give you a pretty easy hint. The answer to this specific riddle is the title of the chapter.
Haha no problem. It’s the riddles that are super obvious that are the hardest ones to solve.
Is the answer not time??? Im stuck on this as well
If its the riddle for the gateway than no. That riddle answer isn't time it is loneliness.
can someone help me with all Iliff's devotion points? 2 devotion points left and I'm already racking my brains xd
Sorry I did not see this. I am planning to make a way to track which devotion points you missed as it is tricky to find them all with how many hidden paths exist in the game already. Bare with me and I will try to get this particular update out quickly.
How can i get all of yukine's devotion points? I only get 6/8
Well, it looks like there may be a bug here. There is only 7 released devotion points after checking the files. The last one is in the side story that I did not finish yet. Here is a small guide though to help.
Yukine Devotion Point Locations
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1 - Coin Toss Game
2 - Converse with Yukine after having selected very specific choices after meeting back up with everyone from exploring Angel Heights with Iliff.
3 - Select a specific set of responses while speaking to Yukine in Angel Heights after everyone else has disappeared.
4 - "A little help never hurt" - Choose this at the end of Chapter 1.
5 - Talk about those 'parts' in the beginning of Chapter 2
6 - Answer correctly to Yukine's question about time.
7 - Correctly answer all the trial questions with Yukine when he's talking through the orb.
8 - [Not released] Complete the questions all correctly
Thank you for the guide and keep up the good work.
Help i'm stuck on Iliff side story (T^T)
Stuck how?
on the administrator password:)
Ah, you need to answer the questions all correctly based on the events that happened. It will eventually mention the doodles on the letter that you received from your mother and that will spell out the password.
For ease of the situation since you were stuck on it, I will write the password here if you do not want to go through the hassle of trying to poke through the parts of the side story again.
Password: Stars or stars
Either or is acceptable for the scene to progress.
I just wanted to know, how many chapters will be in this game? It's fine if you don't know yet.
My goal was 24. This only applies to the main story. The side-stories are separate. This number can change depending on how the story branches out and how the writing goes.
Ok, thanks for clarifying, I can't wait to see where this vn goes!
No problem!
Is there any way to change the color of the text or the text box? It's quite hard to read the white text over blue.
There is not at the moment, but I can look into possibly adding something like that in the future.
I'm really enjoying it so far, I love your writing!!! but I feel stupid for not getting Iliff's 11 points
Haha thank you! It's tricky to get all the devotion points since some of them are in very obscure places and there's several branching paths that exist which some won't even show up if you don't have prior points so it's actually a pretty complex system. I was thinking of making a guide for it in the future to be honest. So, don't beat yourself up for missing some!
Has anyone got the answer to the rittle in the new build
Hint:
What is the theme of the chapter
I love the story is really interesting
Thank you! A lot of work has gone into this story x3.
this current iteration of the story is the best so far, it flows great and while it feels like some things are introduced too quickly the plot explains why things are happening so quickly
I’m glad you’re enjoying it. Yeah the speed of introducing things is a hard balance when it comes to stories with plot points that put the characters on a timer essentially. Hopefully the next updates to come balance things out a bit better c: