Hmm i got the "lie to yukine" devotion point and then when i go through the next one i get is the "defend my ideals". Im missing "complete the trace in order" can someone tell me how to get this one? There dont seem to be any choices in between there and i couldnt find any traces anymore there....
This would be the trace in the basement just before you enter the room with all the debris. During this trace there’s choices to continue on or to hold back. You need to hold back once you reach the door. This trace only can be activated when the corruption says to trace. Very small window to do it.
After some more searching i found it! Also found the one at kurbelthors hideout which yukine created to trach mel a lesson while looking for the missing trace haha
That one though doesnt seem to have any major impact on anything am i right? Im no asking for exact locations but are there any more traces at random places that dont really matter in terms of devotion points or plot and are just there for lore or background info like the one at the hideout? I mean you could totally miss that one and i dont see any downside to it...
Yeah there's a few traces spread out through Chapter 3. They are mostly for lore dumps but a few can have accompanying devotion points. Later on, I plan to make another page in the Star-Chart to track the traces, just have not gotten to it yet. There are no traces in the new update since you can't have a trace in a world created by magic.
Intertwined has a bunch of hidden paths that don't trigger unless certain events are completed. You may have spoken to him in the dorm, but if the triggers were not met it would not trigger the specific branch to get his devotion point.
For the fate devotion point you need to already have obtained the point prior in the prologue which will trigger the scene. Afterwards you have to confront him and then ask about the future.
Could i have a hint on the prologue like what the first decision I should make cause i have been at it for about 30 mins and that hint would help me enough for me to figure it out by myself.
Well first and foremost you need to make sure that you have NSFW turned on. Make sure the text in the options is lit up. If it is not, the devotion system does not work properly. 2nd. The hint is you think Yukine looks fine as he is. You will understand what that means if you decide to talk with Yukine.
hello! absolutely LOVE your game and how great the story is! (I'm pretty emotional so it kinda got me lol,) also, I know that this is a philosophical game but is there going to be any "intimate" or nudity scenes within the game? Other than that, I think this game is GREAT!
Im glad your enjoying the game! Yes, there actually is some already. One notable scene is within Yukine's side story. The game is a slow burn due to the nature of the story but there will be nsfw.
In Yukine's side story, for the last question of speaking the words the saved you. Which time exactly is it talking about? There are multiple times where Melmond gets saved and I can't seem to find the correct words for it.
Ok. So, same subject. (Sorry for bothering you again with this.) But I've tried going though the story again and I can't find the words for it. Is it possible for you to give me a list of moments where the words are said, or (If its too much hassle to go make said list) for you to give me the words. Sorry again for bothering you with this.
I've enjoyed what you've made so far, though this anticipation has me in mess because I wanna know what sort of crazy shenanigans we're instore for. I can wait though since I stumbled upon this
I definitely will try to. I know I have been pretty bad about updating the progress which I will try very hard to keep everyone in the loop going forward.
I know keeping everyone posted can be hard. I also know that working with renply takes a lot of patience as well. Trust I want to make my own vn but I am not a good artist and I don't have the money to pay anyone to do the art work for me. Not to mention I have a 15 year old laptop that I write a book on, play multiple visual novels, and try making 3d models so I can make animated videos using while have a job from 8am - 2 pm 5 days a week and practicing the piano and trying to stream. I try to do a lot at once. Luckily I can with my adhd.
Oh man. That is a lot of stuff to do all at once. I have a normal job on top of the VN and several other stuff. My ADHD works against me sadly and makes me forget to do a lot of things like keep people up to date so it is a constant battle to keep myself in line with everything going on.
Im always hyper because of my adhd but i learned to control it for the most part but my adhd also effects my attention to stuff. If i start focusing on anything then i wont notice anything else. If i dont focus on anything then i space out
It's quite surprising to find a visual novel game this good, i've never expected a visual novel be so down deep yet so touched when the good sentences pops up (bare with me bc i've never played a vn game like this before). The amount of effort put into this i could guess a lot or even more.
But anyway, all i wanted to say is that this game is amazing and quite interesting and touching when i kept on facing irl problems, most of the sentences just hit me right to the heart like nothing everytime i feel lost, i'm impressed on this vn for sure and i'm looking forward for more, but if that's all, it's fine, i can just restart from scratch and try every choices i did not choose.
I am so glad you’re enjoying the game and I will keep doing my best to bring more quality updates to the table. Yukine’s second devotion point is a troublesome one to get due to requiring a string of correct choices to trigger it.
You're always welcome, and for the devotion points, i guess all i have to do is try to backtrack which choices i might've missed or didn't get chosen and hope luck is on my side.
For now, yes. I am working on some new QoL changes that will help with hints and trackers for the devotion points. I just have been trying to sort out the code for the star-chart since when I made it, it was hastily coded and kind of a mess.
i see, well i don't want to interrupt you further so i just want to say thank you for responding to my and other people's comments despite focusing on developing the game further and facing our greatest enemy which is life itself with difficult obstacles to pass through, but i have hope on you that you can make it through, that's all from me, again, thank you from my heart.
hello can someone help me i will quickly explain i am in chapter 2 where the main character Melmond and his friends find a portal the thing is there is a riddle here is the riddle question
A.R.M.A.:I can fill a space or a single mortal heart. If you try to distribute me, I will always leave. There are those who have me, but I cannot be shared For I only exist as one, I can never be matched
so I already tried to think of the answer but of course it was a failure so is it possible to give me either the answer or some hints :(
Sorry I did not see this. I am planning to make a way to track which devotion points you missed as it is tricky to find them all with how many hidden paths exist in the game already. Bare with me and I will try to get this particular update out quickly.
Well, it looks like there may be a bug here. There is only 7 released devotion points after checking the files. The last one is in the side story that I did not finish yet. Here is a small guide though to help.
Yukine Devotion Point Locations
------------------------------- 1 - Coin Toss Game 2 - Converse with Yukine after having selected very specific choices after meeting back up with everyone from exploring Angel Heights with Iliff. 3 - Select a specific set of responses while speaking to Yukine in Angel Heights after everyone else has disappeared. 4 - "A little help never hurt" - Choose this at the end of Chapter 1. 5 - Talk about those 'parts' in the beginning of Chapter 2 6 - Answer correctly to Yukine's question about time. 7 - Correctly answer all the trial questions with Yukine when he's talking through the orb. 8 - [Not released] Complete the questions all correctly
Ah, you need to answer the questions all correctly based on the events that happened. It will eventually mention the doodles on the letter that you received from your mother and that will spell out the password.
For ease of the situation since you were stuck on it, I will write the password here if you do not want to go through the hassle of trying to poke through the parts of the side story again.
Password: Stars or stars Either or is acceptable for the scene to progress.
My goal was 24. This only applies to the main story. The side-stories are separate. This number can change depending on how the story branches out and how the writing goes.
Haha thank you! It's tricky to get all the devotion points since some of them are in very obscure places and there's several branching paths that exist which some won't even show up if you don't have prior points so it's actually a pretty complex system. I was thinking of making a guide for it in the future to be honest. So, don't beat yourself up for missing some!
this current iteration of the story is the best so far, it flows great and while it feels like some things are introduced too quickly the plot explains why things are happening so quickly
I’m glad you’re enjoying it. Yeah the speed of introducing things is a hard balance when it comes to stories with plot points that put the characters on a timer essentially. Hopefully the next updates to come balance things out a bit better c:
This visual novel is very unique in a good way this visual novel does feel like its anime like or something with its dialouge and plot or how the character react in a good way and i swear the comedy aspect of it is 10/10 cant wait for more
To start, My save files date back to the start of 2021. I decided to search this VN up after quite some time, and was pleasantly surprised to find an almost completely different game. I downloaded it and finished chapter 1 in one sitting at the time of writing this comment.
My two major "issues" would have to be:
1. The font
Slightly straining at first, you eventually get used to it. The ability to change it without throwing back a million errors would be nice though, as it left my eyes feeling weird after awhile.
2. Oversized genitalia
Basically my only gripe regarding the art, otherwise it suits the story really well. I know this has been rectified to some extent but calling it a distraction is an understatement. Regardless, it doesn't affect the score or my opinion of the VN as a whole.
I think the rewrite is amazing and makes the story much easier to follow along with when compared to 2021. The writing is excellent and consistent. The theme and plot are pretty solid and leave lots of room for expansion in future chapters.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but this seems to be a one man show. I hope to see an official public discord server where (hopefully) community members can contribute to the project. Although the goal of 20+ chapters is commendable, it's highly unrealistic for someone with a life and a job.
Overall, this VN gets a solid 8.5/10. I wish you all the best with your project, and hope you seriously consider a public discord server!
P.S The fact that there are only 90 reviews is a travesty, if you haven't already I would highly recommend advertising your VN (and hopefully your related discord server) in the Furry Visual Novel discord server. (Feel free to mention me when you do! @Weed Priest)
P.P.S Given the clear amount of effort and time investment, this VN deserves WAY more attention and support.
Only began the novel and had a good laugh for one pretty big reference to one anime episode))
Moment where Cecilia intimidated half of students to leave.
Maybe spoiler so i put it down.
Really do not understand why Melmond was so surprised about Illif mother because they literally have same pattern on muzzle.As i saw her i already suspected that she perhaps is his relative.
About Transcedents , MC , his new friends... Everything at the end of current build was just too cliche.
The reasoning for not understanding boils down to a lot of German Shepherds do look similar in fur pattern plus it was not really something he thought about as it's not a huge known topic that Cecilia has children.
As for the cliche. I do agree I went for a bit of a cliche topic here since I did not want to hit super hard on too much given its only Chapter 1. I hope that the future plans I have will make the game overall seem less cliche once pieces fall where they need to!
I never really set a main interest for the story. Iliff is the easiest to get with because the MC can relate to him the most.
In terms of the MC, I wrote him the way I did because this is his rise so action so to speak so he’s going to be pretty bad in the first few chapters and seem pretty bland at the start.
I found the text rather hard to read on the left side of the text box (i.e. where the text intersects with the hexagons). Perhaps you should change the text box or the text font to make it more readable.
Hmm this never came up before but I can see if maybe I can push the text over a bit so it does not overlap with the hexagons. I’ll put this in my list of items to work on for the next update.
Just finished the first chapter and I need to say I love the story and characters so far. But I have a question - is it possible in this build to get our shep butt naked without him covering anything with his boxers? I tried multiple combination of choices but the best I managed to get is him in his boxers or covering himself with them.
There is not currently but down the line there will be ways to get them to show their stuff. So for now all I can say is soooon! hehe~ Glad you love the game!
I understand, thanks for the answer, now I can imagine a little how they are, in the first CG of melmond and Iliff, the Iliff seems to have an inch more compared to melmond, but I think that's what you meant in your answer. But other than that I'm loving every bit of this visual novel, I'm looking forward to the next update, it may take as long as it takes but I'll wait patiently. Happy new year, even if it's late!!!!
Yeah I am a bit bad with heights for art but they are roughly the same height give or take. Im glad your loving the VN and I will try to make the next updates faster its just this one had a lot of moving parts so it took longer to create lol. Happy New Year!
I kind of like the original better near the beginning but the re-write is better later on, I felt more continuity with the main character pre-rewrite at least the chunk near the start.
the plot so far, a lot of it can be understood very basically if you apply the lens of chaos theory (works for pre-rewrite and post-rewrite)
it would be simple to assume reality is a complex system and the corruption is some outside variable that was somehow introduced, which would lead to rippling effects through out the entire complex system.
and considering the outside variables are completely unknown this brings to light the quantum uncertainty principle which is probably where any kind of powers would arise from, a simple shift in prospective here + there and congrats you're a dog dang hairy wizard. (damn that's like a pun inside a pun XD)
haha I had to double take and read this over again to grasp a few parts but yeah the re-write is to allow more story to fit without falling off in some places. The beginning of the old one was pretty good but I feel all will come to a good point once the next update is out.
eh, sorry about the complexity XD commentary is no expertise of mine and/but the story very much itches my internal philosopher. I'll be looking forward to see what's up between my usual.
In my eyes there are some changes from the "original" I miss / feel awkward currently. In any case, I can't wait to see how this turns out, keep up the good work! (edited for poor grammar)
Pretty interesting story so far, I like the concept a lot and I'm curious to see where you take it.
I do have to ask though - The hyper genitals on the characters, is that just a standard stylistic choice for you or is there some story related reason for it?
when it asked for the riddle my mind went blank haha.
just finished the game and its absolutely great,
will there be an update that continues to their training session??, i just played this yesterday and finished today,it would be great if it has a context that shows how the MC will get the other cards...
The game is actually going through some major re-writes. The 1.0 update that exists is the rewrite to Day 1. These re-writes are to pull all the characters more in line and actually get some missed plot-points into the game.
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Hey Thanks for your Help Before! sorry i didn't say it before so Thanks! but...i got another Riddles! Why!!! :'(
This game does have a lot of riddles. Abandonment should be the answer for this one.
Help! i'm not good with riddles :'(
loneliness is the answer.
Hmm i got the "lie to yukine" devotion point and then when i go through the next one i get is the "defend my ideals". Im missing "complete the trace in order" can someone tell me how to get this one? There dont seem to be any choices in between there and i couldnt find any traces anymore there....
This would be the trace in the basement just before you enter the room with all the debris. During this trace there’s choices to continue on or to hold back. You need to hold back once you reach the door. This trace only can be activated when the corruption says to trace. Very small window to do it.
Oh okay! I remember that when the corruption was talking about tracing but i must have missed the window then, thanks alot!
No problem!
After some more searching i found it! Also found the one at kurbelthors hideout which yukine created to trach mel a lesson while looking for the missing trace haha
That one though doesnt seem to have any major impact on anything am i right? Im no asking for exact locations but are there any more traces at random places that dont really matter in terms of devotion points or plot and are just there for lore or background info like the one at the hideout? I mean you could totally miss that one and i dont see any downside to it...
Yeah there's a few traces spread out through Chapter 3. They are mostly for lore dumps but a few can have accompanying devotion points. Later on, I plan to make another page in the Star-Chart to track the traces, just have not gotten to it yet. There are no traces in the new update since you can't have a trace in a world created by magic.
How do you talk about fate with Yukine.
Also idk if this is a bug or not but when i spoke with Yukine in the dormitory it didn't give his face with a heart next to it.
Intertwined has a bunch of hidden paths that don't trigger unless certain events are completed. You may have spoken to him in the dorm, but if the triggers were not met it would not trigger the specific branch to get his devotion point.
For the fate devotion point you need to already have obtained the point prior in the prologue which will trigger the scene. Afterwards you have to confront him and then ask about the future.
Could i have a hint on the prologue like what the first decision I should make cause i have been at it for about 30 mins and that hint would help me enough for me to figure it out by myself.
Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck why do there have to be so many combinations I just want to 100% Yukines path
Well first and foremost you need to make sure that you have NSFW turned on. Make sure the text in the options is lit up. If it is not, the devotion system does not work properly.
2nd. The hint is you think Yukine looks fine as he is. You will understand what that means if you decide to talk with Yukine.
Thx
hello! absolutely LOVE your game and how great the story is! (I'm pretty emotional so it kinda got me lol,) also, I know that this is a philosophical game but is there going to be any "intimate" or nudity scenes within the game? Other than that, I think this game is GREAT!
Im glad your enjoying the game! Yes, there actually is some already. One notable scene is within Yukine's side story. The game is a slow burn due to the nature of the story but there will be nsfw.
Alright. This is deep, philosophical, creepy, and TOTALLY up my alley. Loving this already.
I’m very glad you’re enjoying it so far! Even more crazy shenanigans to come.
Why do xou have a grudge against ostriches?? 🤣
haha it’s a running joke between myself and my proofreader so we just rolled with it.
Heh, well they are devilish birds 😉 in a single day, I watched 1ne steal my chips and throw my friend from her back 😅
That is very true haha! If you aren't careful they will peck you!
Potential Spoiler:
In Yukine's side story, for the last question of speaking the words the saved you. Which time exactly is it talking about? There are multiple times where Melmond gets saved and I can't seem to find the correct words for it.
So this refers to his past. The scene that showed him as a kid. There should be three words that are mentioned a couple times in the VN.
Thanks.
Ok. So, same subject. (Sorry for bothering you again with this.) But I've tried going though the story again and I can't find the words for it. Is it possible for you to give me a list of moments where the words are said, or (If its too much hassle to go make said list) for you to give me the words. Sorry again for bothering you with this.
Keep marching on are the words in question. That question was designed to actually be really hard so thats why its a tricky one to get right.
Thank you. And sorry again for bothering you with this.
The story and the characters are so good 😊 I literally cry because it can also be applied to real life events and experience.
That was the goal of this story to reflect real life closely minus the magic of course haha. Glad your enjoying it!
I've enjoyed what you've made so far, though this anticipation has me in mess because I wanna know what sort of crazy shenanigans we're instore for. I can wait though since I stumbled upon this
Haha I am glad that your enjoying it and don't worry a new update is coming soon!
As long as you keep us updated on your work, i dont mind the wait. If i had the money i would support you on patrion
I definitely will try to. I know I have been pretty bad about updating the progress which I will try very hard to keep everyone in the loop going forward.
I know keeping everyone posted can be hard. I also know that working with renply takes a lot of patience as well. Trust I want to make my own vn but I am not a good artist and I don't have the money to pay anyone to do the art work for me. Not to mention I have a 15 year old laptop that I write a book on, play multiple visual novels, and try making 3d models so I can make animated videos using while have a job from 8am - 2 pm 5 days a week and practicing the piano and trying to stream. I try to do a lot at once. Luckily I can with my adhd.
Oh man. That is a lot of stuff to do all at once. I have a normal job on top of the VN and several other stuff. My ADHD works against me sadly and makes me forget to do a lot of things like keep people up to date so it is a constant battle to keep myself in line with everything going on.
Im always hyper because of my adhd but i learned to control it for the most part but my adhd also effects my attention to stuff. If i start focusing on anything then i wont notice anything else. If i dont focus on anything then i space out
Same here. I do need to keep focus pretty consistently or before I know it several hours have passed by and I have done 0 work.
It's quite surprising to find a visual novel game this good, i've never expected a visual novel be so down deep yet so touched when the good sentences pops up (bare with me bc i've never played a vn game like this before). The amount of effort put into this i could guess a lot or even more.
But anyway, all i wanted to say is that this game is amazing and quite interesting and touching when i kept on facing irl problems, most of the sentences just hit me right to the heart like nothing everytime i feel lost, i'm impressed on this vn for sure and i'm looking forward for more, but if that's all, it's fine, i can just restart from scratch and try every choices i did not choose.
That's all i can say, sincerely, thank you.
sorry if my words and sentences are not clear xd
(i'm also suffering trying to get the second devotion point on Yukine bc i'm stupid lol)
I am so glad you’re enjoying the game and I will keep doing my best to bring more quality updates to the table. Yukine’s second devotion point is a troublesome one to get due to requiring a string of correct choices to trigger it.
You're always welcome, and for the devotion points, i guess all i have to do is try to backtrack which choices i might've missed or didn't get chosen and hope luck is on my side.
Again, thank you.
For now, yes. I am working on some new QoL changes that will help with hints and trackers for the devotion points. I just have been trying to sort out the code for the star-chart since when I made it, it was hastily coded and kind of a mess.
i see, well i don't want to interrupt you further so i just want to say thank you for responding to my and other people's comments despite focusing on developing the game further and facing our greatest enemy which is life itself with difficult obstacles to pass through, but i have hope on you that you can make it through, that's all from me, again, thank you from my heart.
hello can someone help me i will quickly explain i am in chapter 2 where the main character Melmond and his friends find a portal the thing is there is a riddle here is the riddle question
A.R.M.A.:I can fill a space or a single mortal heart. If you try to distribute me, I will always leave. There are those who have me, but I cannot be shared For I only exist as one, I can never be matched
so I already tried to think of the answer but of course it was a failure so is it possible to give me either the answer or some hints :(
For ease, I will give you a pretty easy hint. The answer to this specific riddle is the title of the chapter.
Haha no problem. It’s the riddles that are super obvious that are the hardest ones to solve.
Is the answer not time??? Im stuck on this as well
If its the riddle for the gateway than no. That riddle answer isn't time it is loneliness.
can someone help me with all Iliff's devotion points? 2 devotion points left and I'm already racking my brains xd
Sorry I did not see this. I am planning to make a way to track which devotion points you missed as it is tricky to find them all with how many hidden paths exist in the game already. Bare with me and I will try to get this particular update out quickly.
How can i get all of yukine's devotion points? I only get 6/8
Well, it looks like there may be a bug here. There is only 7 released devotion points after checking the files. The last one is in the side story that I did not finish yet. Here is a small guide though to help.
Yukine Devotion Point Locations
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1 - Coin Toss Game
2 - Converse with Yukine after having selected very specific choices after meeting back up with everyone from exploring Angel Heights with Iliff.
3 - Select a specific set of responses while speaking to Yukine in Angel Heights after everyone else has disappeared.
4 - "A little help never hurt" - Choose this at the end of Chapter 1.
5 - Talk about those 'parts' in the beginning of Chapter 2
6 - Answer correctly to Yukine's question about time.
7 - Correctly answer all the trial questions with Yukine when he's talking through the orb.
8 - [Not released] Complete the questions all correctly
Thank you for the guide and keep up the good work.
Help i'm stuck on Iliff side story (T^T)
Stuck how?
on the administrator password:)
Ah, you need to answer the questions all correctly based on the events that happened. It will eventually mention the doodles on the letter that you received from your mother and that will spell out the password.
For ease of the situation since you were stuck on it, I will write the password here if you do not want to go through the hassle of trying to poke through the parts of the side story again.
Password: Stars or stars
Either or is acceptable for the scene to progress.
I just wanted to know, how many chapters will be in this game? It's fine if you don't know yet.
My goal was 24. This only applies to the main story. The side-stories are separate. This number can change depending on how the story branches out and how the writing goes.
Ok, thanks for clarifying, I can't wait to see where this vn goes!
No problem!
Is there any way to change the color of the text or the text box? It's quite hard to read the white text over blue.
There is not at the moment, but I can look into possibly adding something like that in the future.
I'm really enjoying it so far, I love your writing!!! but I feel stupid for not getting Iliff's 11 points
Haha thank you! It's tricky to get all the devotion points since some of them are in very obscure places and there's several branching paths that exist which some won't even show up if you don't have prior points so it's actually a pretty complex system. I was thinking of making a guide for it in the future to be honest. So, don't beat yourself up for missing some!
Has anyone got the answer to the rittle in the new build
Hint:
What is the theme of the chapter
I love the story is really interesting
Thank you! A lot of work has gone into this story x3.
this current iteration of the story is the best so far, it flows great and while it feels like some things are introduced too quickly the plot explains why things are happening so quickly
I’m glad you’re enjoying it. Yeah the speed of introducing things is a hard balance when it comes to stories with plot points that put the characters on a timer essentially. Hopefully the next updates to come balance things out a bit better c:
This visual novel is very unique in a good way this visual novel does feel like its anime like or something with its dialouge and plot or how the character react in a good way and i swear the comedy aspect of it is 10/10 cant wait for more
Thank you. I am an avid anime lover so I am not surprised it comes off very anime-like.
Skip button doesn't work
On which build. PC/Android?
MacOS
Hmm I will have to take a look at it. Make sure to check if unseen text is checked in preference cause that sometimes may cause the issue.
Yeah I checked the unseen text, but it still doesn't work
Hmm okay, I will look into it cause I am not sure what might of caused that.
I'm not trying to rush you, but I would like to ask if there will be an update in the near future? If yes then when?
Yes there will be. My hope is that it will be ready by tomorrow. I’m just waiting on some last minute proof reading to be done.
To start, My save files date back to the start of 2021. I decided to search this VN up after quite some time, and was pleasantly surprised to find an almost completely different game. I downloaded it and finished chapter 1 in one sitting at the time of writing this comment.
My two major "issues" would have to be:
1. The font
Slightly straining at first, you eventually get used to it. The ability to change it without throwing back a million errors would be nice though, as it left my eyes feeling weird after awhile.
2. Oversized genitalia
Basically my only gripe regarding the art, otherwise it suits the story really well. I know this has been rectified to some extent but calling it a distraction is an understatement. Regardless, it doesn't affect the score or my opinion of the VN as a whole.
I think the rewrite is amazing and makes the story much easier to follow along with when compared to 2021. The writing is excellent and consistent. The theme and plot are pretty solid and leave lots of room for expansion in future chapters.
Correct me if I'm wrong, but this seems to be a one man show. I hope to see an official public discord server where (hopefully) community members can contribute to the project. Although the goal of 20+ chapters is commendable, it's highly unrealistic for someone with a life and a job.
Overall, this VN gets a solid 8.5/10. I wish you all the best with your project, and hope you seriously consider a public discord server!
P.S The fact that there are only 90 reviews is a travesty, if you haven't already I would highly recommend advertising your VN (and hopefully your related discord server) in the Furry Visual Novel discord server. (Feel free to mention me when you do! @Weed Priest)
P.P.S Given the clear amount of effort and time investment, this VN deserves WAY more attention and support.
Only began the novel and had a good laugh for one pretty big reference to one anime episode))
Moment where Cecilia intimidated half of students to leave.
Maybe spoiler so i put it down.
Really do not understand why Melmond was so surprised about Illif mother because they literally have same pattern on muzzle.As i saw her i already suspected that she perhaps is his relative.
About Transcedents , MC , his new friends... Everything at the end of current build was just too cliche.
4/5
The reasoning for not understanding boils down to a lot of German Shepherds do look similar in fur pattern plus it was not really something he thought about as it's not a huge known topic that Cecilia has children.
As for the cliche. I do agree I went for a bit of a cliche topic here since I did not want to hit super hard on too much given its only Chapter 1. I hope that the future plans I have will make the game overall seem less cliche once pieces fall where they need to!
The MC I don't think highly but I like Illif feels like the he's the main love interest since he's a match to the MC
I never really set a main interest for the story. Iliff is the easiest to get with because the MC can relate to him the most.
In terms of the MC, I wrote him the way I did because this is his rise so action so to speak so he’s going to be pretty bad in the first few chapters and seem pretty bland at the start.
I found the text rather hard to read on the left side of the text box (i.e. where the text intersects with the hexagons). Perhaps you should change the text box or the text font to make it more readable.
Hmm this never came up before but I can see if maybe I can push the text over a bit so it does not overlap with the hexagons. I’ll put this in my list of items to work on for the next update.
Just finished the first chapter and I need to say I love the story and characters so far. But I have a question - is it possible in this build to get our shep butt naked without him covering anything with his boxers? I tried multiple combination of choices but the best I managed to get is him in his boxers or covering himself with them.
There is not currently but down the line there will be ways to get them to show their stuff. So for now all I can say is soooon! hehe~ Glad you love the game!
Loving the story, it's a little different from the old one, but it's still good, but a question how tall are the four main characters?
The characters are all roughly around 6ft tall. Iliff is slightly shorter than the others. I may have to adjust some sprites to reflect this.
I understand, thanks for the answer, now I can imagine a little how they are, in the first CG of melmond and Iliff, the Iliff seems to have an inch more compared to melmond, but I think that's what you meant in your answer. But other than that I'm loving every bit of this visual novel, I'm looking forward to the next update, it may take as long as it takes but I'll wait patiently. Happy new year, even if it's late!!!!
Yeah I am a bit bad with heights for art but they are roughly the same height give or take. Im glad your loving the VN and I will try to make the next updates faster its just this one had a lot of moving parts so it took longer to create lol. Happy New Year!
I kind of like the original better near the beginning but the re-write is better later on, I felt more continuity with the main character pre-rewrite at least the chunk near the start.
the plot so far, a lot of it can be understood very basically if you apply the lens of chaos theory (works for pre-rewrite and post-rewrite)
it would be simple to assume reality is a complex system and the corruption is some outside variable that was somehow introduced, which would lead to rippling effects through out the entire complex system.
and considering the outside variables are completely unknown this brings to light the quantum uncertainty principle which is probably where any kind of powers would arise from, a simple shift in prospective here + there and congrats you're a dog dang hairy wizard.
(damn that's like a pun inside a pun XD)
haha I had to double take and read this over again to grasp a few parts but yeah the re-write is to allow more story to fit without falling off in some places. The beginning of the old one was pretty good but I feel all will come to a good point once the next update is out.
eh, sorry about the complexity XD commentary is no expertise of mine and/but the story very much itches my internal philosopher.
I'll be looking forward to see what's up between my usual.
yes a new update woo I love intertwined
Im glad you do!
Just played both the 0.09 alpha build and the current 1.02 build and damn it's like a totally different game!
yeah the 1.0 and beyond builds I rebuilt the game from the ground up cause I didn’t like how I rushed certain parts lol.
In my eyes there are some changes from the "original" I miss / feel awkward currently. In any case, I can't wait to see how this turns out, keep up the good work! (edited for poor grammar)
I'm back to see what i've been missing since the first chapter.
Not to much yet. There’s still a ton more to come regarding all aspects of the story!
Pretty interesting story so far, I like the concept a lot and I'm curious to see where you take it.
I do have to ask though - The hyper genitals on the characters, is that just a standard stylistic choice for you or is there some story related reason for it?
it originally was a style choice but I have been thinking about making it a story item that could be pretty interesting. Not quite sure yet.
The idea of a sign of peoples power awakening is that their genitals suddenly become hyper is quite amusing.
I mean it definitely sounds hilarious but who knows what might happen when magic is involved haha
Talk about mega co... Err, mega sheath ^///^"
Yeaaa that theme will be a normalcy through the game. Love the look of them lol!
please help me the riddle i try everything but can not find the answer
The riddle answer is time. I will make sure to make that more apparent in the future if I do that type of thing again.
thank you
when it asked for the riddle my mind went blank haha.
just finished the game and its absolutely great,
will there be an update that continues to their training session??, i just played this yesterday and finished today,it would be great if it has a context that shows how the MC will get the other cards...
The game is actually going through some major re-writes. The 1.0 update that exists is the rewrite to Day 1. These re-writes are to pull all the characters more in line and actually get some missed plot-points into the game.
the rewrite is great. its plot makes a lot more sense than before but is also more immersive. I can't wait for more
Thank you! This is definitely the direction we have been aiming for!