hey ummm the coin game train scene seems to still not be working the nsfw toggle seems to work as I can get the devotion point from the talk in the room if nsfw is on but the train scene is just completely skipped.
I wanted to start off saying that this Visual Novel was enjoyable and fun to read. It was honestly a unique experience that I haven't seen in others. It is genuinely fun, a wild ride to go through, and you can see the work brimming with passion. I've been reading it with a buddy and we've been having a blast just going through chapter 1, which is surprise with how long the novel is, which is another perk.
However, there are some criticism I do have with this. Some are small and not that big of a deal, another is a bit worrying and I'll get to that shortly.
MASSIVE SPOILERS AHEAD! (not really but to be safe)
The font: it is very difficult to read for someone with dyslexia, it's not very viewer friendly and can even cause eyestrain. I had to go into Ren'py's font option (the A key) to change to font to comic sans to read. I'm not sure why it was chosen or what it adds, but it takes away from an otherwise really good experience.
Dialogue at the start is stilted/forced. This improves later on as the writer finds their voice and is inspiring to see how far it had vastly refined itself, and that's one of the things that's very motivational about the project is seeing you improve so well and make something really great! It's just that, I hope when you have the time, the prologue gets a bit more polishing it needs and a bit more proof reading/pacing patches.
NOW FOR THE BIGGEST CRITICISM OF THE GAME:
This was probably one of the moments where I had to stop reading because of how dumbstruck it left me, a visual novel that's got really inspiring quotes of doing better that feel like they're coming from a genuine place, had made a point to say that it was the victim's fault for being raped. It didn't help that it was also followed by these lines:
It ruined the scene, I mean tainted an otherwise really good character moment with the MC and even made Yukine look really, really bad. The first example was okay enough, not the greatest, but when this came right after, I couldn't believe it, even my friend couldn't. It felt weird and disjointed to where we weren't sure if this was the view of the creator filtering in, but it wasn't good. And it's a shame because it's just this one line that put me and my friends off from something that was really enjoyable. I thought it'd be good to bring it to your attention because I think it was just a poor judgment, a misstep to be precise. Again, I am really, really enjoying the VN, even my friends are as well, it's just this one line kind of dented a lot of the meaning and philosophy the writer is trying to make.
hi hi and thank you for the comments and the criticism. The view from that scene is definitely not of my own. I even had a few second guesses when adding in that scene and the verbiage because of the fact that Yukine as a character has lived for so very long he has a very darkened view of the world for reasons that open up later. He was suppose to be painted as a not very caring character until later on but I can see why this scene would cause some issues to read.
That being said, I will take a look at going back and reviewing the scene to try and make it portray the correct intentions without sounding so dark. Thank you for bringing this to my attention and I will do what I can to rectify this mistake in writing!
Hi, first off love the game and it's great to see a dev that's so invested in their community. Now I have a question. I can't seem to get Yukine devotion point (really cool system btw) 'Talk after choosing the right path'. Is this a glitch or could I have missed something? (I managed to get all other devotion points in the prolog and chapter one.)
hi hi! Thank you for the compliments! I am out of state right now and don’t actually remember all the path choices by heart there’s quite a few but once I get back I can update this with how to get that point! Sorry for that :c
Sorry I had to get back to the code to check it over. During the first Chapter when you get to the part where you have to choose to give in to the corruption or resist it, follow this:
Give in to the corruption
- "If your so concerned about my body language, you don't portray it well"
Would you not say that is a valid hypothesis?
- "Yes."
Converse with Yukine
That should get you to the devotion point your looking for.
Can anyone help me with how to get the last oganku devotion point "talk to oganku privately". I've already gone back a few times if I missed something but there isn't.
This devotion will only trigger if you have 7 devotion points prior to reaching this scene. During the scene where Iliff complains about Cecilia in Yukine's fake world, you need to choose the "Okay. I get it." choice and if you have the required devotion, it will trigger the scene for this one. You need to choose that you believe in it in order to get this devotion in that scene.
Thank you very much, could I ask another question? In question, the scene with the coin on the train, does it have any action to happen? I remember that you have to look for Iliff and Yukine to happen, but that option doesn't even appear for me anymore, it just says that I arrived at angel heights. I'm going after all of Yukine's devotion points this time.
In an old save of mine it does, however only if the nfsw is neither activated nor deactivated (neither of which is white), if I activate it before this scene it doesn't happen, so there is no way to start a new save to activate the nfsw to gain Yukine's point before and then have the train scene. or am I doing something wrong.
but in a new one, if it is neither active nor deactivated, the scene does not occur as in the old save, if it is like this, would it be a bug?
Yes. I recently updated the NSFW switch. Due to this, you need to go into preferences and make sure you re-toggle it. It is off by default which will skip that scene. I forgot to add that in my patch notes.
the scene with Yukine talking about the fate is ok because I activated nfsw, however the train scene does not activate. Then I tried to deactivate it before the train scene, but it still doesn't work just Skip the scene.(Sorry to bother you with this).
I'm going to load my old save so I can get the train scene.
Hello author, I like this work very much, its language is very profound, but I am a player from China, my English level can be said to be worse than six or seven years old children, when I use the translator to see this work, you do not know how difficult I have, I do not expect you to launch a Chinese translation, but I hope you can single out a guide to each character ♥ And the answers to various riddles. I would appreciate it if you could fulfill my request, but this is just a complaint, and please ignore it if it adds to your workload. I really enjoy this work even if it is a non-polished translation by robots.
Hello and yeah I do apologize that there is only an english version at this moment. If you need help with any of the riddles I can easily help. For right now the following answers will assist. ARMA riddle : Stars 1st Chapter riddle: Time 2nd Chapter riddle: Loneliness 3rd Chapter riddle: Abandonment
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hey ummm the coin game train scene seems to still not be working the nsfw toggle seems to work as I can get the devotion point from the talk in the room if nsfw is on but the train scene is just completely skipped.
Hmmm. Okay Let me take another look at why it seems to be breaking. It may be a different code causing issues now.
I wanted to start off saying that this Visual Novel was enjoyable and fun to read. It was honestly a unique experience that I haven't seen in others. It is genuinely fun, a wild ride to go through, and you can see the work brimming with passion. I've been reading it with a buddy and we've been having a blast just going through chapter 1, which is surprise with how long the novel is, which is another perk.
However, there are some criticism I do have with this. Some are small and not that big of a deal, another is a bit worrying and I'll get to that shortly.
MASSIVE SPOILERS AHEAD! (not really but to be safe)
NOW FOR THE BIGGEST CRITICISM OF THE GAME:
This was probably one of the moments where I had to stop reading because of how dumbstruck it left me, a visual novel that's got really inspiring quotes of doing better that feel like they're coming from a genuine place, had made a point to say that it was the victim's fault for being raped. It didn't help that it was also followed by these lines:
It ruined the scene, I mean tainted an otherwise really good character moment with the MC and even made Yukine look really, really bad. The first example was okay enough, not the greatest, but when this came right after, I couldn't believe it, even my friend couldn't. It felt weird and disjointed to where we weren't sure if this was the view of the creator filtering in, but it wasn't good. And it's a shame because it's just this one line that put me and my friends off from something that was really enjoyable. I thought it'd be good to bring it to your attention because I think it was just a poor judgment, a misstep to be precise. Again, I am really, really enjoying the VN, even my friends are as well, it's just this one line kind of dented a lot of the meaning and philosophy the writer is trying to make.
hi hi and thank you for the comments and the criticism. The view from that scene is definitely not of my own. I even had a few second guesses when adding in that scene and the verbiage because of the fact that Yukine as a character has lived for so very long he has a very darkened view of the world for reasons that open up later. He was suppose to be painted as a not very caring character until later on but I can see why this scene would cause some issues to read.
That being said, I will take a look at going back and reviewing the scene to try and make it portray the correct intentions without sounding so dark. Thank you for bringing this to my attention and I will do what I can to rectify this mistake in writing!
Hi, first off love the game and it's great to see a dev that's so invested in their community. Now I have a question. I can't seem to get Yukine devotion point (really cool system btw) 'Talk after choosing the right path'. Is this a glitch or could I have missed something? (I managed to get all other devotion points in the prolog and chapter one.)
hi hi! Thank you for the compliments! I am out of state right now and don’t actually remember all the path choices by heart there’s quite a few but once I get back I can update this with how to get that point! Sorry for that :c
Sorry I had to get back to the code to check it over. During the first Chapter when you get to the part where you have to choose to give in to the corruption or resist it, follow this:
Give in to the corruption
- "If your so concerned about my body language, you don't portray it well"
Would you not say that is a valid hypothesis?
- "Yes."
Converse with Yukine
That should get you to the devotion point your looking for.
Thanks my dude
uh cant get the coin game point with yukine that and i cant get the flirt point and the agree with motives point for illiff
Yes sorry about this. There’s a bug with some scenes I’m working to fix. I’ll try to get a hotfix out soon.
Can anyone help me with how to get the last oganku devotion point "talk to oganku privately". I've already gone back a few times if I missed something but there isn't.
This devotion will only trigger if you have 7 devotion points prior to reaching this scene. During the scene where Iliff complains about Cecilia in Yukine's fake world, you need to choose the "Okay. I get it." choice and if you have the required devotion, it will trigger the scene for this one. You need to choose that you believe in it in order to get this devotion in that scene.
Thank you very much, could I ask another question? In question, the scene with the coin on the train, does it have any action to happen? I remember that you have to look for Iliff and Yukine to happen, but that option doesn't even appear for me anymore, it just says that I arrived at angel heights. I'm going after all of Yukine's devotion points this time.
In an old save of mine it does, however only if the nfsw is neither activated nor deactivated (neither of which is white), if I activate it before this scene it doesn't happen, so there is no way to start a new save to activate the nfsw to gain Yukine's point before and then have the train scene. or am I doing something wrong.
but in a new one, if it is neither active nor deactivated, the scene does not occur as in the old save, if it is like this, would it be a bug?
Obs:Android.
Yes. I recently updated the NSFW switch. Due to this, you need to go into preferences and make sure you re-toggle it. It is off by default which will skip that scene. I forgot to add that in my patch notes.
the scene with Yukine talking about the fate is ok because I activated nfsw, however the train scene does not activate. Then I tried to deactivate it before the train scene, but it still doesn't work just Skip the scene.(Sorry to bother you with this).
I'm going to load my old save so I can get the train scene.
Hello author, I like this work very much, its language is very profound, but I am a player from China, my English level can be said to be worse than six or seven years old children, when I use the translator to see this work, you do not know how difficult I have, I do not expect you to launch a Chinese translation, but I hope you can single out a guide to each character ♥ And the answers to various riddles. I would appreciate it if you could fulfill my request, but this is just a complaint, and please ignore it if it adds to your workload. I really enjoy this work even if it is a non-polished translation by robots.
Consciousness is what I translated into English with a translator, and I'm sorry if it's ambiguous, but I really love this work
Hello and yeah I do apologize that there is only an english version at this moment. If you need help with any of the riddles I can easily help. For right now the following answers will assist.
ARMA riddle : Stars
1st Chapter riddle: Time
2nd Chapter riddle: Loneliness
3rd Chapter riddle: Abandonment
Let me know if this helps at all.
This is very helpful. Thank you for your answer
No problem.
I need help with IIiff quest
Which part are you stuck on exactly?
the computer password
stars
one last thing how get lliff love all the way to 8
The Star-Chart should list all of the places that you can get his points.
Does anyone know how to flirt with IIiff and the other one
How can I do IIoff quest
If you mean his side story, you can access it once you finish the main story and open the Star chart from the headspace.
Ok
What about this one
search the back of the auditorium and use the trace power.
thank you so much what about this one sorry